College Admissions Info

Hunter College - CUNY, ‘19
BS, Biology

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 2 supplemental essays
  • 5 advice topics

Student Background

I am currently an undergraduate student at Hunter College looking to pursue a career in health care.
From: Brooklyn , New York
Gender: Female
Race/Ethnicity: White Non-Hispanic
Legacy: No
Admission: Regular Decision
Applied To: 8 schools
Accepted At: Hunter, Baruch, Brooklyn College, CUNY City, Queens, JJay
Denied At:
Waitlisted At:
Withdrew From:
Is English First Language: Yes

Test Scores

None Reported

High School Performance

GPA, Weighted
Top 25%
High School Type: Public
AP / IB Classes and Scores:
Academic Performance in High School: Steady

Extracurriculars & Awards

Sports: Lacrosse
Extracurricular Activities: Tutoring/Mentoring, Key Club, Drama Production Crew
How Spent Summers:
Volunteer Experiences:
Application Additional Materials:

College Application Essays

Personal Statement: Athletic achievement
458 Words
A wolf pack is a group that travels and hunts as a unit. They use their speed and power to overcome whatever comes in front of them. We made our way onto the battle field, hungry. Our hearts raced as we approached our first victim. We showed no fear and no mercy. Together we proved to be victorious. I was part of a pack. I was part of the lacrosse team. I walked into the office not knowing what I...

Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
339 Words
I sprinted up the stairs as I heard the screeching of the metal as the train came to a stop. I managed to get to the platform on time, only to see a crowd. I nudged my way onto the train and waited for the screeching to commence. I began counting the minutes—one, two, three, four…—until the screeching came to an end. I had arrived. This is the circadian cycle of an average New Yorker. While some might...

Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance
536 Words
As I stepped off that plane, I was slapped by the cold air that hit my cheeks. The sight of the bright cotton-like snow was the first thing to grasp my attention. I thought to myself, “I am here,” but it was not how I imagined it. When I imagined the Promised Land, like many other immigrants, I imagined a place where the streets are made of gold and money grows on trees. Although it was different from things back...

College Admissions Advice

Why I ultimately chose my school
133 Words
Hunter College wasn't exactly my first choice personally but it was my best choice financially. I was so caught up in wanting to go away so I can get the “real” college experience, I didn't realize that maybe staying at...

My favorite course thus far, and why
29 Words
My favorite course as of now has to be...

5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
17 Words
Five adjectives that describe a...

What I’d change about my application process
29 Words
What I would change about my application process is...

Recommended summer activities during high school and college
35 Words
I would recommend working or even interning in something that could...