I work hard and love to succeed and excel at something I care about. I played varsity sports and captained both my teams as a senior. I constantly stayed on top of community service and extracurricular activities. Interviews were key for me, my grade point average and sat scores were not my strong suits, so the interview had to be killed. I am very personal and have a strong and commanding voice. If you really care about a school, visit...

wrote about my senior soccer season. I was not initially selected as captain and had to work extremely hard for it. I wrote about the effects of not being captain.

College Essay New Rough Draft 1 My heart stopped, the blood raced to my head, my hand clenched and the tears welled up in my eyes. I could not believe that, in a matter of seconds my dream was lost. I looked around the crowded cafeteria and spotted my dad, who at that moment was probably the only person in the room who knew just how I felt. But, as I calmed down, and my heart slowed, I realized that this...

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