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Class of2019
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Fordham University (New York, NY)
Applied for a B.A. in English
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Personal Statement668 WordsOvercoming personal struggle, Childhood memory, Family member’s disability, Issue of personal significance, Story central to identityThis past summer, I saw my grandmother for the first time in six years. She hugged me, looked me straight in the eye and said cheerfully, “My husband says that you are his friend, so now we are friends too, nice to meet you!” My mind blanked and all I wanted to do was run away and cry. But looking past my grandmother’s shoulder, I saw the red rimmed eyes of my grandfather begging me to play along. So...Read more...Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school342 Words(Amherst College) PROMPT: Respond to this quote: “Stereotyped beliefs have the power to become self-fulfilling prophecies for behavior.” [300 words max] There are infinite definitions of success. Attending a top STEM (Science/Technology/Engineering/Math) school in the Silicon Valley, the “success” of my peers consists of STEM-related achievements and ultimately, securing high-paying STEM jobs. Few question this definition of success, because many have limited exposure to (or interest in) the definitions that exist elsewhere. And so throughout middle school, I...Read more...Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school237 Words(Santa Clara University) Prompt: "Santa Clara University's strategic vision promises to educate citizens and leaders of competence, conscience, and compassion and cultivate knowledge and faith to build a more humane, just, and sustainable world. What aspect of SCU’s strategic vision appeals to you? Why?" I believe that compassion a crucial aspect life. Although our nation’s brutal and shameful history of slavery is behind us, discrimination and injustice still exist in our everyday lives. Recent controversy surrounding police violence...Read more...General Admissions Advice
My favorite course thus far, and why70 WordsIntroduction to Theater: with only 15 students in the class, the professor (who is a producer of many off-Broadway productions) was able...Read more...5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)49 WordsPassionate, focused, aware, fun, excited. Attending a liberal arts college has allowed me to meet...Read more...Why I declined other schools62 WordsAlthough UCLA would have been a smart choice for me since it is close to home and the cost...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders34 WordsGet to really know your teachers and guidance counselors. If...Read more...What I like about my school’s location and culture52 WordsLocated in the Upper West Side of Manhattan, the opportunities for internships are endless. Although the...Read more...Most popular extracurricular activities at my college4 WordsInternships,...Read more...High School Performance
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SportsWater Polo, Swimming/Diving
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