nekoyumi
nekoyumi,
UPenn ‘
B.A., Nursing, , Economics
Chinese-American
Features Included
2
Essays
7
Schools
14
Scores
1
Advice
6
ECs
0
Sports

Background

Hometown Fremont, California
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
AdmissionEarly Decision
English First Language Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken Mandarin

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
  • University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)
  • University of California - San Diego (La Jolla, CA)
  • University of California - Los Angeles (Los Angeles, CA)
  • University of California - Irvine (Irvine, CA)
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University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)

Applied for a B.A. in Nursing

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: Both Parents

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
556 Words
Embracing your heritage, Transition to adulthood
Chasing the Ball of Yarn When I first picked up the ball of soft strings of wool and cotton fibers, I was completely entranced. It was a simple object, but it was amazing how one could use two sticks and yarn to make new creations with practical applications, almost like magic. Learning to knit and crochet was marvelous. Loops intertwined with other loops formed a web of cloth and created something worth far more than what I began with. The...
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Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay
607 Words
Healthcare is one of the most pressing issues of our time, crippling our country’s national budget and increasing in cost ever so steadily each and every year. It may be audacious of me to delve into such a subject in an essay where the focus is supposed to be glorifying the self and persuading others of my worthiness and compatibility with the University of Pennsylvania, but I as an individual am nothing more than a shrimp struggling against the...
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General Admissions Advice

How to increase chances at my school
77 Words
Early decision increases your chances by almost 300% (regular my year was 9.9% admission but early was 25%). Be sure to do your research for the...
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High School Performance

Rank
Top 1%
 
High School TypePublic
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades

Test Scores

Highest SAT
2330
 
SAT Score Details
 
Converted SAT Score1570
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep
SAT IIs
PSAT Scores
Other Standardized Tests

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details9 classes and scores

Sports

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesCulinary, Nursing Home Volunteer, Debate Club/Team, Hospital Volunteer, Science Club/Team, Computer / Technology Volunteer

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received
Application Additional Materials

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