MelStern
MelStern,
NYU ‘18
B.S., Finance
Features Included
2
Essays
11
Schools
7
Scores
4
Advice
3
ECs
1
Sports

Background

Hometown Havana, Cuba
GenderFemale
EthnicityHispanic
AdmissionRegular Decision, Early Action
English First Language No
Other Language(s) Spoken Spanish

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • New York University (New York, NY)
  • Vanderbilt University (Nashville, TN)
  • American University (Washington, DC)
  • University of Miami (Coral Gables, FL)
  • Ohio State University - Columbus (Columbus, Oh)
  • Case Western Reserve University (Cleveland, OH)
  • Fordham University (New York, NY)
  • University of Virginia (Charlottesville, VA)
  • University of Minnesota - Twin Cities (Minneapolis, MN)
  • Pennsylvania State University - University Park (University Park, PA)
  • Brown University (Providence, RI)
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New York University (New York, NY)

Applied for a B.S. in Finance

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
918 Words
Story central to identity
It was Valentine’s Day six years ago. There were no roses, chocolate, or any romanticism in the air; there was instead, the scent of puke, fear, sea spray, yet a trace of freedom. It is mind-boggling what a human being is capable of enduring for liberty, even risking life itself. On the eve of my third attempt at attaining freedom, I contemplated in my eleven year-old mind, what I had been denied my native land. I was leaving behind...
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Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay
450 Words
Today, after a great deal of speculation, we would like to present the newest Chief Executive Officer of ABM Industries, Melanie Delgado. This young woman is driven, ambitious, and has a vision far beyond what her thirty years of life could have provided. We gladly welcome her to the team. ” I was born and raised in Havana, Cuba. When I turned eleven years old, my mom and I got on a boat and never looked back. When I first arrived,...
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General Admissions Advice

List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience
139 Words
I had an interview for Brown University. My interviewer was an older lady, probably one of the nicest people I have ever met. She mainly asked me about my goals, and why Brown. She absolutely loved me, and thought I was an...
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Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice
86 Words
Fastweb.com, cappex.com and just google in general should be your best friends. Apply to local scholarships rather than large ones. It might seem more...
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How to increase chances at my school
165 Words
New York University Stern School of Business is all about diversity, diversity, and extracurriculars. Yes, you must have scores on the higher side, but nothing too out of the ordinary. My math scores were terrible when compared to other admitted students, but I really stood out through my essay, and...
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My advice about getting recommenders
62 Words
I had my middle school teacher whom I worked with to write my bill, write one of them. I've...
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High School Performance

Rank
Top 1%
 
High School TypePublic
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Low at first but improved

Test Scores

Highest ACT
29
 
ACT Score Details
 
Other ACT Scores
Highest SAT
2000
 
SAT Score Details
 
Converted SAT Score1410
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details4 classes and scores

Sports

SportsSoccer

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesFuture Business Leaders of America (FBLA), Hospital Volunteer, National Honor Society
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences

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