ToriZ
ToriZ,
UBC ‘19
B.A., Business Management
Features Included
3
Essays
7
Schools
11
Scores
5
Advice
7
ECs
1
Sports

Background

Hometown Montreal, Washington
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
AdmissionRegular Decision
English First Language No
Other Language(s) Spoken Mandarin, French

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • University of British Columbia (British Columbia, Canada)
  • University of California - Los Angeles (Los Angeles, CA)
  • McGill University (Montreal, Canada)
  • Boston University (Boston, MA)
  • University of California - Davis (Davis, CA)
  • University of California - Irvine (Irvine, CA)
  • University of Massachusetts - Amherst (Amherst, MA)
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University of British Columbia (British Columbia, Canada)

Applied for a B.A. in Business Management

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
200 Words
Creative personal story
As a newborn, I was diagnosed with eczema. When asked about my condition, I would mumble my response so others could not understand. Sometimes, I placed bandages on affected areas and said that I had endured some injury. Truly, the only thing injured was my self-esteem. Eczema is both a physical and mental challenge. In fact, as I write as these words, I must squash the urge to itch. Since my toddler years, I have sought new therapies in three...
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Supplemental Essay Issue of personal significance
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Additional Essay Details
168 Words
Interestingly, a profound relationship with a neighbor, named Jennifer, came unexpectedly when I was just fourteen years old. A special needs adult, but a high-functioning wonderful woman, needed a sitter and companion on evenings and weekends. Through a combination of watching Disney cable programs, - Austin & Ally is her favorite program, - Hawaiian Luau dances, dinners, and conversations, I discovered how much positivism Jennifer radiated to me. Yet, I knew that the spectrum of negative stereotypes for those suffering from...
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General Admissions Advice

My favorite course thus far, and why
28 Words
I love Gender studies and Social Justice because...
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5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
5 Words
Motivated/ multi-tasking/...
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What set me apart from other applicants
25 Words
I didn't solely focus on grades and went...
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Why I declined other schools
19 Words
I loved the idea of going...
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How to increase chances at my school
20 Words
Focus on what you're good at...
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High School Performance

GPA
3.7
(no specification of weighting)
Rank
Top 25%
 
High School TypePublic
Academic Performance in High School Some good some bad

Test Scores

Highest SAT
1900
 
SAT Score Details
 
Converted SAT Score1350
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep
SAT IIs

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details6 classes and scores

Sports

SportsTennis

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesHabitat for Humanity, Student Council / Government, French Club, Key Club, National Honor Society, Library Volunteer, School Newspaper/Magazine/Journalism
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received

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