College Admissions Info

ToriZ
ToriZ
University of British Columbia, ‘19
BA, Business Management

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • Test Scores
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 1 supplemental essays
  • 5 advice topics

Student Background

From: Montreal , Washington
Gender: Female
Race/Ethnicity: Asian
Legacy: No
Admission: Regular Decision
Applied To: 7 schools
Accepted At: UBC, BU, UC Davis, UC Irvine, UMass
Denied At:
Waitlisted At:
Withdrew From:
Is English First Language: No
Other Language(s) Spoken: Mandarin, French

Test Scores

1900
SAT
Converted SAT Score: 1350
Highest SAT: 1900
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High School Performance

3.70
GPA
Top 25%
Rank
High School Type: Public
AP / IB Classes and Scores:
Academic Performance in High School: Some good some bad

Extracurriculars & Awards

Sports: Tennis
Extracurricular Activities: Habitat for Humanity, Student Council / Government, French Club, Key Club, National Honor Society, Library Volunteer, School Newspaper/Magazine/Journalism
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College Application Essays

Personal Statement: Creative personal story
200 Words
As a newborn, I was diagnosed with eczema. When asked about my condition, I would mumble my response so others could not understand. Sometimes, I placed bandages on affected areas and said that I had endured some injury. Truly, the only thing injured was my self-esteem. Eczema is both a physical and mental challenge. In fact, as I write as these words, I must squash the urge to itch. Since my toddler years, I have sought new therapies in three...





Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance
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Additional Essay Details:
168 Words
Interestingly, a profound relationship with a neighbor, named Jennifer, came unexpectedly when I was just fourteen years old. A special needs adult, but a high-functioning wonderful woman, needed a sitter and companion on evenings and weekends. Through a combination of watching Disney cable programs, - Austin & Ally is her favorite program, - Hawaiian Luau dances, dinners, and conversations, I discovered how much positivism Jennifer radiated to me. Yet, I knew that the spectrum of negative stereotypes for those suffering from...



College Admissions Advice

My favorite course thus far, and why
28 Words
I love Gender studies and Social Justice because...





5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
5 Words
Motivated/ multi-tasking/...





What set me apart from other applicants
25 Words
I didn't solely focus on grades and went...





Why I declined other schools
19 Words
I loved the idea of going...





How to increase chances at my school
20 Words
Focus on what you're good at...