momentofzen,
UPenn
B.S., Biology
I am a freshman at the University of Pennsylvania studying biology and business with a minor in computer science in the Life Sciences & Management Program.
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Background
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
AdmissionEarly Decision
Class of2018
English First Language
Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken
Mandarin, Cantonese, French
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Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
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University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
Applied for a B.S. in Biology
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Personal Statement610 WordsChildhood memory, Creative personal story, Embracing your heritage, Family background, Issue of personal significanceMy Mom, Play-Doh, and Me Cheeks flushed salmon pink, I focused on my shoes, drawing simple patterns on the tiled floor to avoid eye contact. I felt the lingering gaze of my mom’s college classmates, who hovered over me like scientists examining a microscope slide. Their eyes bounced between my mom and me, scrutinizing our features. Mere seconds felt like eternity until finally, they concluded, “Wow, you look exactly like your mom!” The comparison was outrageous. At 14, I wanted...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay69 WordsI talked about why I loved LSM, the research and business and service opportunities at Penn, with the theme of searching for the perfect smoothie blend of college characteristics. This was based on my own personal experience with a specific smoothie food truck at Penn and my summer experiences on campus. I was able to tell a vivid story because I spent a month at Penn myself during LBW.Read more...General Admissions Advice
What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school451 WordsHere is my advice for how to write the "Why Penn" essay that I shared with a couple of my friends. Of course, adapt this to whatever college/program you may be applying to! Hope it helps! 1) Make it personal to you. Think of it almost like you're trying to prove that Penn is a great fit for you in terms of academics, service, and research opportunities (you can choose to focus on the aspects that are most important and applicable to you). The college application process is kind of like dating; it takes a while to find the "perfect...Read more...High School Performance
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Highest SAT1540on 1600 scaleHighest SAT2260SAT Score Details
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Details10 classes and scoresSports
SportsSwimming/Diving
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ActivitiesChurch, DECA (Distributive Education Clubs of America), School Newspaper/Magazine/Journalism, Tutoring/Mentoring, National Honor Society, Math Team, Nonprofit, NGO or Charitable Organization, Student Council / Government
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