chmo,
Stanford
B.S., Computer Science, , Electrical and Electronics Engineering
I love robots and languages! Feel free to ask me for any advice.
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Background
Hometown
Palo Alto, California
GenderOther
EthnicityAsian, Prefer Not to Share
AdmissionRegular Decision
Class of2020
First Gen College StudentNo
English First Language
Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken
Spanish, Mandarin, Cantonese
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
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Stanford University (Stanford, CA)
Applied for a B.S.
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement667 WordsCareer aspirations, Interest in fine arts, Interest in tech/engineeringKindergarteners often want to be astronauts; a former kindergartener, I stuck with my dream longer than most. But no dreamer, I recognise being the first human on Mars takes planning. Last year, I started learning Russian to communicate with cosmonauts. I read every NASA astronaut’s biography. Over the last few years, I’ve dedicated myself to pursuing the core values of NASA astronauts: resilience, creativity and adaptability, teamwork, and curiosity. My four years on my NASA-sponsored FIRST robotics team,...Read more...Personal Statement458 WordsCareer aspirations, Development of personal values, Interest in tech/engineering, Leadership experienceFor the past four years, I’ve spent my nights in a rundown building by a NASA airfield, home to our all-girls FIRST Robotics Competition (FRC) team, the Space Cookies. On a typical night, the programmers rule the whiteboards. We scribble free-body diagrams, drafting complex algorithms to keep our robot aligned. “Aha!” cries Divya,“the derivative of rotational error is rotational joystick speed!” Lynn, another rookie, doodles a smiley by “dtheta”. Our rookies love calculus but couldn’t have solved...Read more...As a child, I filled notebooks with symbols and ciphers of my own devising, each with a certain meaning. I know now that I was creating rudimentary languages. Back then, I simply loved the patterns I found everywhere around me. To me, computer science (CS) is a field based in the study of patterns. From its roots in math, which Michael D. Resnik called the “Science of Patterns” in his 1981 text, to the concept of design patterns, CS interests me...Read more...Personal Statement265 WordsCareer aspirations, Creative personal story, Interest in tech/engineeringFor the past four years, I’ve spent my nights in a rundown building by a NASA airfield, home to our all-girls robotics team, the Space Cookies. On a typical night, the programmers rule the whiteboards. We scribble free-body diagrams, drafting complex algorithms to keep our robot aligned. “I got it!” cries Divya, three months into the team. “The derivative of rotational error’s the rotational joystick speed!” Lynn, another rookie, doodles a smiley by “dtheta”. Our rookies love calculus...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest257 WordsThe summer before sophomore year was a prime summer. I participated in the California State Summer School for Mathematics and Science. For four weeks, I explored topology, symmetry, hyperbolic geometry, and the twin prime conjecture, the widely accepted but still unproven concept that there exist infinitely many twin primes. To me, math is reassuring in its truth. But prime numbers fascinate me because although math is a study of patterns, in all the research, primes have evaded any predictability. As...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Other543 WordsThe largest of only three Girl Scout FRC teams in the world, the Space Cookies have played a huge role in impacting not just my life, but in the thousands of youth we reach locally and globally with our unique science and engineering opportunities. As a rookie on my robotics team, I was one of the few who made it onto the programming subteam--an isolated group lacking sufficient trained members to create a sustainable infrastructure. The programming leadership seemed to...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school655 WordsAs a preschooler, I filled notebooks with symbols and ciphers of my own creation. I know now that I was creating rudimentary languages. Back then, I loved the patterns I found everywhere. To me, computer science (CS) is based in studying patterns. From its roots in math, which is the science of patterns, to the concept of design patterns, reusable solutions to recurring problems, CS interests me because it harnesses patterns to address challenges. My current interest in CS is...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay510 WordsAs a preschooler, I filled notebooks with symbols and ciphers of my own devising, each with a certain meaning. I know now that I was creating rudimentary languages. Back then, I simply loved the patterns I found everywhere around me. To me, computer science (CS) is a field based in the study of patterns. From its roots in math to design patterns, reusable solutions to recurring problems, CS interests me because it harnesses patterns to address challenges. My goal at...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school252 Words
For the past four years, I’ve spent my nights in a rundown building by a NASA airfield, unobtrusive compared to nearby Hangar One. Inside, our robotics lab is warm, vibrant, and home to my all-girls team, the Space Cookies. On a typical Saturday night in January, the programming team holds sovereignty over the whiteboards. We scribble out free body diagrams full of vectors and angles, drafting complex algorithms to keep our robot moving straight. “I just thought of something!”...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay668 WordsAs a preschooler, I filled notebooks with symbols and ciphers of my own devising, each with a certain meaning. I know now that I was creating rudimentary languages. Back then, I simply loved the patterns I found everywhere around me. To me, computer science (CS) is a field based in the study of patterns. From its roots in math, the science of patterns, to the concept of design patterns, a generally reusable solution to a recurring problem, CS interests me...Read more...School Specific Advice
What I’d change about my application process34 WordsI would apply to less schools. I already applied to...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received30 WordsI used a private admissions counselor and she wasn't...Read more...List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience122 WordsPrinceton - my interviewer was really nice. He was friendly and interested in the topics I talked about. We met at a Starbucks for about 2 hours and he asked me about my interests. Cornell...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders56 WordsAsk people you have had interactions with outside of just class. I asked my history teacher, with...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to56 WordsI was very focused and wanted a school with a good engineering program that wasn't too large....Read more...The stress level and competitiveness of a typical student at my school60 WordsPeople are extremely stressed, but there is a culture of pretending that it's fine and that you're all...Read more...How to increase chances at my school15 Wordshave parents that work at...Read more...Most popular extracurricular activities at my college41 WordsA lot of people do a capella and dance groups. There are...Read more...More Essays
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Personal Statement667 WordsCareer aspirations, Interest in fine arts, Interest in tech/engineeringKindergarteners often want to be astronauts; a former kindergartener, I stuck with my dream longer than most. But no dreamer, I recognise being the first human on Mars takes planning. Last year, I started learning Russian to communicate with cosmonauts. I read every NASA astronaut’s biography. Over the last few years, I’ve dedicated myself to pursuing the core values of NASA astronauts: resilience, creativity and adaptability, teamwork, and curiosity. My four years on my NASA-sponsored FIRST robotics team,...Read more...General Admissions Advice
What set me apart from other applicants47 WordsI was not very well-rounded compared to other applicants -- I spent a lot...Read more...How I made up for low grades in high school63 WordsI had low grades for a couple semesters due to health issues. Because I had low grades in classes...Read more...How I narrowed down my essay topics58 WordsI honestly just chose topics that I loved to talk about. You're not going to enjoy writing...Read more...High School Performance
Unweighted GPA3.96RankTop 10%
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