College Admissions Info

University of Pennsylvania, ‘21
BS, Business Management

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • Test Scores
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 5 supplemental essays
  • 4 advice topics

Student Background

Physicist and entrepreneur, planning to do a dual degree in Management at Wharton and Physics from the College. No idea why there are so many majors listed :L
From: Dubai , United Arab Emirates
Gender: Male
First Gen College Student: No
Race/Ethnicity: Asian
Accepted At: CMU, UC Berkeley
Denied At:
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Withdrew From:
Is English First Language: Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken: Arabic, French, Korean, Urdu

Test Scores

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High School Performance

GPA, Weighted
Top 1%
High School Type: International
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Academic Performance in High School: Steady

Extracurriculars & Awards

Sports: Track & Field
Extracurricular Activities: School Jazz / Orchestra, Math Team, Nonprofit, NGO or Charitable Organization, Student Council / Government
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College Application Essays

Personal Statement for UPenn, CMU, Princeton, MIT, CalTech: Creative personal story
619 Words
  While I first learned to communicate as a young child, I didn’t truly speak until I was fifteen.  Music’s arms first embraced me when my dad unveiled the realm of jazz to me. He covertly snuck me into a jazz café, eager to pull back the curtain covering the jazz world. Seeing the café, empty, confined and bleak, even on a Saturday night, he assured me that my underage presence would see the fresh jazz talent arriving any...

Supplemental Essay for UPenn: “Why us” school essay
1570 Words
PENN ESSAYS: [I applied to the M&T program but didn't get in] How will you explore your intellectual and academic interests at the University of Pennsylvania? Please answer this question given the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying. (400-650 words) Countries are competitive; industries are competitive; individuals are competitive. There’s an underlying perception that resources are scarce, which pushes individuals to prioritize self-interest. But if we are to innovate dramatically, ideas need to be shared so...

Supplemental Essay for Princeton: “Why us” school essay
1227 Words
PRINCETON ESSAYS: 5. Using a favorite quotation from an essay or book you have read in the last three years as a starting point, tell us about an event or experience that helped you define one of your values or changed how you approach the world. Please write the quotation, title and author at the beginning of your essay. “He hoped and prayed that there wasn't an afterlife. Then he realized there was a contradiction involved here and merely hoped that...

Supplemental Essay for UC Berkeley: “Why us” school essay
1537 Words
BERKELEY ESSAYS: [EECS Accepted, think it was because I demonstrated my outside passion e.g. building a Tesla Coil] 2. Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side. While I first learned to communicate as a young child, I didn't truly speak until I was fifteen. My father covertly snuck me into a jazz cafe, eager...

Supplemental Essay for CalTech: “Why us” school essay
1723 Words
CALTECH ESSAYS: [See advice section for what I would've done differently; maybe I overdid the quirky a bit] In an increasingly global and interdependent society, there is a need for diversity in thought, background, and experience in science, technology, engineering and mathematics. How do you see yourself contributing to the diversity of Caltech's community? (200 word max) People remember three things about me: curiosity, perseverance and a monobrow. As a child, my life was not studying with a stern parent standing...

Supplemental Essay for MIT: “Why us” school essay
1312 Words
MIT ESSAYS: [This was my top choice; I was deferred and then rejected] Although you may not yet know what you want to major in, which department or program at MIT appeals to you and why? (100 words or fewer) Bach is my favourite mathematician. In his fugues, he manipulates fractals and isometries to transform simplistic lines into sophisticated pieces. Like Bach, I consider myself a musical mathematician: I aspire to pursue a double major in courses 18 and 21. Two summers ago,...

College Admissions Advice

What I’d change about my application process
283 Words
There's so much, but honestly just focus on a few things and really nail them to the point that you are internationally competitive. Pick something you love and just go for it, because you're likely to do better in it with a genuine passion. Be smart with your ED/EA and other people from your school, and be realistic! Recommendations are sooooo important so develop strong relations with your teachers. Knowing the culture of the school by talking to someone really helps (e...

Recommended summer activities during high school and college
95 Words
I didn't really do that much in summers, but I read loads and studied undergrad topics. Something different (not the generic high school summer program) that shows your capabilities....

Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received
69 Words
I used one just to support my disadvantage of only applying Junior year. She was an angel and really helped me....

What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school (MIT, CalTech)
133 Words
With MIT and Caltech, I understand why I didn't get in. Whilst I embarked on a research project related to wireless electricity (and built a Tesla Coil), I think my problem was that I wasn't able to shine amongst...