Temple ‘22
B.A., Women’s Studies
Very independent and outspoken
Features Included


Hometown University Park, Maryland
EthnicityBlack / African American
First Gen College StudentNo

Results, Essays, and Advice

Waitlisted or Withdrew
  • Temple University (Philadelphia, PA)
  • University of Miami (Coral Gables, FL)
  • University of Maryland - College Park (College Park, MD)
  • University of California - Santa Cruz (Santa Cruz, CA)
  • University of Washington (Seattle, WA)
  • Ohio State University - Columbus (Columbus, Oh)
  • University of California - Los Angeles (Los Angeles, CA)
  • University of California - San Diego (La Jolla, CA)
  • Hofstra University (Hempstead, NY)
  • Towson University (Towson, MD)
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Temple University (Philadelphia, PA)

Applied for a B.A. in Women’s Studies

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you’ve already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.
In my dreams, I can speak two languages. I wish that when I woke up and stepped onto the lacrosse field I was still able to speak two languages. I love playing Lacrosse, it has acted as a huge part of who I am today and I don’t know where I would be without it. While I love Lacrosse, I have definitely faced some challenges being a part of the Northwestern High School Varsity Lacrosse team over the last...
What have you done to make your school or your community a better place?
My school percent is low when it comes to college enrollment, my school is also 99% minority. While some may not see the correlation, at my school there is a huge one. For years there has been this idea in society that if you are undocumented you can’t attend college or if you are African American you’re not smart enough for college. While this idea has started to be broken down in society over the years, it hadn’t...
Personal Statement
324 Words
Challenged a belief, Controversial topic
The hardest part of being a teenager for me is when I speak up for my beliefs in equality and against injustice, I am constantly told I don't know what I am talking about because I’m only seventeen and have no life experience to speak too. This is extremely hard for me because I consider myself someone who is an activist, who loves to educate myself and others about the injustices around the world, and particularly in our country....
Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement
288 Words
Our families and communities often define us and our individual worlds. Community might refer to your cultural group, extended family, religious group, neighborhood or school, sports team or club, co-workers, etc. Describe the world you come from and how you, as a product of it, might add to the diversity of the University of Washington. ( 300 limit )
I have come to understand that it is not our background that defines us but how we choose to implement what we have learned from this background into our world. I have been through a lot in my life but in spite of all the tribulations that I have had to experience, I remain positive, goal-oriented, and humble. These implementations have saved me from resenting where I am from and the experiences that I have had to go through. The...

School Specific Advice

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General Admissions Advice

How I made up for low grades in high school
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Extracurriculars, Volunteer...
How to deal with the stress of applying to college
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Time management!! Make sure you...
My advice about getting recommenders
60 Words
BUILD RELATIONSHIP WITH YOUR TEACHERS !!!! Tell them in advance and give them a deadline 2/3 weeks before the one...

High School Performance

(no specification of weighting)
Top 25%
Academic Performance in High School Low one semester/year

Test Scores

Highest SAT
SAT Score Details
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details3 classes and scores


SportsLacrosse (Recruited)


ActivitiesDebate Club/Team, Tutoring/Mentoring, Green Club, Best Buddies, School Jazz / Orchestra, Other Club/Activity

Experience & Awards

Awards Received

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