Phil
Phil,
Claremont (CMC) ‘17
B.A., Economics, , Psychology
Sophomore at Claremont McKenna College. Studying Economics and Psychology. Running Cross Country and Track.
Features Included
6
Essays
17
Schools
14
Scores
5
Advice
4
ECs
2
Sports

Background

Hometown San Marino, California
GenderMale
EthnicityHispanic
AdmissionRegular Decision
English First Language Yes

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • Claremont McKenna College (Claremont, CA)
  • University of Southern California (Los Angeles, CA)
  • University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)
  • University of California - Davis (Davis, CA)
  • University of California - Riverside (Riverside, CA)
  • University of California - Santa Barbara (Santa Barbara, CA)
  • University of California - San Diego (La Jolla, CA)
  • University of California - Riverside (Riverside, CA)
  • Villanova University (Villanova, PA)
  • Lehigh University (Bethlehem, PA)
  • Yale University (New Haven, CT)
  • Stanford University (Stanford, CA)
  • Georgetown University (Washington, DC)
  • Santa Clara University (Santa Clara, CA)
  • New York University (New York, NY)
  • Boston College (Chestnut Hill, MA)
  • Pomona College (Claremont, CA)
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Claremont McKenna College (Claremont, CA)

Applied for a B.A. in Economics

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: Both Parents

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
588 Words
Athletic achievement, Running
Five in the morning—what a terrible hour. The sun resides on the opposite side of the earth, and the moon looms in the sky subverting the technicality of the word “morning.” Five a.m. — 5:30 exactly—is the time when my alarm clocks assure me that sleep’s comforting embrace is over and the drudgery is about to begin: morning practice on a Monday. Ever since the summer going into my freshman year, I have run cross country and long-distance...
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Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay
122 Words
What influenced me to apply to Claremont McKenna College is the outstanding academic standing of the institution. As the highly-ranked school it is, Claremont would undoubtedly offer me a world-class education. I also know that Claremont has an amazing economics program that I would like to participate in. The small classes and 8:1 student faculty ratio assure me that I would thrive as a student at Claremont McKenna. On a more personal note, Claremont is an ideal location for me to...
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Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school
325 Words
Given the chance to invite anyone to speak at the Athenaeum, I would invite Shai Agassi. A year ago or so, I saw a TED presentation in which Agassi discussed developing worldwide infrastructure for electric cars similar to that which the US already has in place for traditional gasoline fueled cars. Agassi is the founder of the company Better Place which sells battery-charging and swapping services for electric vehicles resembling traditional gas stations. Considering that Agassi is an activist, entrepreneur,...
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Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school
495 Words
Following in the tradition of St. Augustine, I agree that we learn from those around us even if we don’t realize it. We don’t have to be in a classroom or listen to someone we perceive as intelligent in order to learn valuable lessons. The lesson I would like to share with others has nothing to do with chemistry or the proper conjugation of a verb, but I think it’s made all the difference in my academic...
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Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay
146 Words
Knowing that I am considering a career in business, you may be bewildered by my applying to the College of Arts and Sciences rather than applying directly to the Leonard N. Stern School of Business. I am applying to the College of Arts and Sciences because I want to experience the Core Program offered at NYU. I am highly interested in and wish to benefit from its interdisciplinary curriculum. NYU’s Core Program almost seems tailored to my learning style....
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Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay
176 Words
I’m interested in Lehigh for many reasons, but the most prominent is the research-intensive interdisciplinary curriculum. What I am looking to do is get the best education I can: one I know Lehigh could offer given its outstanding reputation. I’m not interested in a college that has a Division 1 football team or one that is located in any particular city. Because I will be entering college undecided, Lehigh is very appealing to me for its excellent programs in...
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General Admissions Advice

Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred
67 Words
I took AP Studio Art in High School, and I sent in my portfolio just to show the admissions board...
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List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience
103 Words
1) Dress formally. It's always better to be overdressed than under-dressed and you really do want to put your best foot forward while interviewing. 2) Show up on time. This is...
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What I’d change about my application process
34 Words
Make sure you're on top of the whole application process. ...
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Most popular extracurricular activities at my college
33 Words
Definitely the most popular extracurricular at my college is athletics. ...
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5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
6 Words
Accomplished, driven,...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.10
 
Rank
Top 25%
 
High School TypeReligious
Academic Performance in High School Low at first but improved
Explanation of Low Grades

Test Scores

Highest SAT
2130
 
SAT Score Details
 
Converted SAT Score1480
SAT Prep
SAT IIs
PSAT Scores

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details8 classes and scores

Sports

SportsCross Country, Track & Field

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesImprov club/team, Latino Student Association, Yearbook, National Honor Society

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received
Application Additional Materials

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