College Admissions Info
Dartmouth College, ‘21
BA, Engineering Science

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • Test Scores
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 2 supplemental essays
  • 3 advice topics

Student Background

I'm a entrepreneur with a passion for innovation and design
From: Bedminster , New Jersey
Gender: Male
First Gen College Student: No
Race/Ethnicity: White Non-Hispanic
Accepted At: UVA, UMich, Pitt, GA Tech, Northeastern
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Test Scores

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High School Performance

GPA, Weighted
Top 10%
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Academic Performance in High School: Steady

Extracurriculars & Awards

Sports: Fencing, Golf, Tennis
Extracurricular Activities: Key Club, Future Business Leaders of America (FBLA), Student Council / Government, Debate Club/Team, National Honor Society, Tutoring/Mentoring
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College Application Essays

Past the tumbling hills and serene fields and through the big bay window lies my sanctuary; the bright yellow colonial farmhouse I call home. A number of summers ago however, it also served as my prison. The summer had just begun when I clumsily mounted a pony for the first time at a birthday party and, like an unbalanced sack of potatoes, unexpectedly tumbled off. Desperately hungry for some cake, my resulting broken wrist was revealed only after a thorough...

Supplemental Essay for Dartmouth: “Why us” school essay
104 Words
I hope to be an engineer and eventually an entrepreneur. Not just any engineer though, I want to be able to work in multiple scientific disciplines, explore interests outside of STEM, and have the fundamental communication skills to be a leader and run a business. At an internship this past summer at a small R&D company, working directly alongside entrepreneurs and other students solidified this goal. Dartmouth’s unique combination of liberal arts education and great engineering programs would...

Supplemental Essay for Dartmouth: Amusing anecdote
305 Words
Saying yes to the dress was one of the most frightening moments I’ve ever experienced. The moment? Playing football. The dress? Putting on our comically mis-sized uniforms The summer before seventh grade, a number of friends jokingly suggested I join the pee-wee football team. As a defiant pudgy kid who still hadn’t hit his growth-spurt, I brushed off their jeers, and took their challenge seriously. Overly confident and brazen, I somehow signed up without asking my concerned parents....

College Admissions Advice

Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received
48 Words
When I was in the process of applying, I was worried about whether or...

What set me apart from other applicants
22 Words
Be genuine and don't be afraid to...

Recommended summer activities during high school and college
43 Words
Try to get summer internships or other research and work opportunities. I interned...