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Oxford
B.A., Geography
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GenderFemale
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Class of2020
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Oxford University (Oxford, England)
Applied for a B.A. in Geography
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement580 WordsCareer aspirations, Interest in other academic subject, International background, One moment that changed youUCAS Statement My earliest forays into Geography consisted of reading about environmentalism and sociopolitics in the National Geographic. Initially attracted by the study of the intricate relationships between man-made and natural spaces, I have since grown to love Geography for its ability to interrogate complex issues troubling societies, while presenting a rich diorama of our world's complex sociopolitical and environmental dynamics. As an A Level Geography student, I have often appreciated the practical applications of geographical theory, particularly when I...Read more...Personal Statement672 WordsMovie or book that changed you, Role model/inspiration, Transition to adulthoodThe year I was born, 1998, Cowboy Bebop was released. It was a highly acclaimed show that won several creative awards, becoming widely hailed as a masterpiece among Japanese animations— and also a subtle, nuanced work that dealt with difficult questions about existentialism and human loneliness. I knew none of that, however, when I first sat down as an unsuspecting girl of eight to watch its first episode with my sister. The result: a simple show about a group of futuristic...Read more...Where else could I find a discipline where I could dabble in environmentalism and human psychology in an entirely legitimate way? Or apply the knowledge of social sciences to understand the malaises of our age, like broken down relationships or socioeconomic polarisation? Even though I’ve never encountered urban studies in its specialised form in my educational experiences, I have gotten a taste of it through urban geography lessons and independent study opportunities at [redacted]. I’ve decided since that...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay159 WordsDearest Duke, how have you been? A little bird said your Nicholas School has been absolutely revolutionary lately. Your students’ groundbreaking research— advocating for sustainable transport, marine conservation— is ever inspiring. It’s clear they’re driven youths who push the envelope in their studies. And that interdisciplinarity! The comprehensiveness of your Environmental Science classes astounds me - it reflects a mature sensitivity to modern global issues that this international applicant appreciates. Ethics, philosophy, science all in Conservation and Development ...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay155 WordsUpon hearing of Brown’s commitment to fostering acceptance and diversity, I knew I had to apply. With a tradition of open-mindedness and hallmark programmes like Minority Peer Counselling, I can thrive at Brown, free from arbitrary constraints and social discrimination. Under these precedents of institutional and social support, I will grow like I never have before. Brown’s open curriculum also means I can pursue my multifaceted interests without sacrificing any of them, like I often had to in...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay505 WordsDid white men ever have to endure living in a perilous ocean of their own enemies? Did the European masters of the 19th century question their homogenous halls of haughtiness, or realise how conspicuously they must have excluded the women and men of racial minorities outside their realms of privilege? Large unanswerable questions these may be, but that is no matter; I have sought to answer them ever since I began wondering about the world around me. I want to...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement243 WordsKurt Vonnegut once said, “If you want to really hurt your parents and you don’t have the nerve to be gay, [you should] at least go into the arts.” He was right. I managed to do both, and look at me now: I’m clearly prizewinner of the Disappointment Olympics. Watch out, world! Jokes aside, being a lesbian in [redacted] isn’t easy. 70% of the public deems homosexuality immoral, so coming out remains social suicide (being gossiped about if...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school156 WordsThe myriad of problems in cities unsettles me. I've seen how stressed my parents look after work, and noticed the rumbles of animosity between [redacted]’s urban young and forgotten elderly. Although touted as the magic bullet of poverty reduction and human development, cities increasingly create and intersect with intractable crises, like Syria’s migration crisis and social alienation— crises we need to solve, and quickly. My peers and family think Urban Studies will turn me insular, studying only the...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement139 WordsTell us where you have lived - and for how long - since you were born; whether you've always lived in the same place, or perhaps in a variety of places. Life as the daughter of two immigrants is inevitably emotionally nomadic. In my childhood, I flitted between [redacted], Hangzhou, and even Switzerland. But despite my crosscultural background (or even because of it), I identify with [redacted] wholeheartedly, especially with the people who pump [redacted]’s fundamental lifeblood. From our...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement106 WordsWhen I come out of the closet, the first thing I’ll do is thank [redacted]’s local community of LGBTQIA artists. Despite being a lesbian in a conservative Chinese immigrant family, in a country that largely deems homosexuality immoral, I accepted myself early on thanks to their presence and influence. Unapologetically visible writers like Jolene Tan and Cyril Wong convinced me not to fear being different, when I was debating closeting myself my entire life. Slowly, these artists are...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay660 WordsBeing an optimistic realist puts one in a strange position. Growing up, I’ve seen so much within my city, despite living on a dingy island in the Southeast Asian region, which unsettles me and made me pessimistic about ever changing the world. It seems as though wars and inequality, corruption and poverty pervade urban societies by design and are unchangeable. All the same, I still earnestly believe in this world and its people’s power to change our fates...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school149 WordsWhat I value most about about working at a hawker centre, or kopitiam, isn’t necessarily tangible things like job titles or earning spare change. Rather, it’s interacting with a different side of [redacted], a side my education unintentionally blinds me to. At work, I strip off my pretensions from school and become simply another staff member at [redacted]. Contrary to perceptions that kopitiam work is degrading, less illustrious than internships at flagship ministries, I find work endlessly meaningful....Read more...Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance350 Words
When my friend died, I joined in the historical struggle of writers to describe the taste of bereavement. I learned from Elizabeth Browning's grace in crafting elegant elegies, connected with WH. Auden's plaintive vulnerability in "Funeral Blues", and laughed, despite myself, at Sylvia Plath's bleak humour and tragicomic honesty. And after many nights of undignified sobbing, I found my perfect description in Regina Spektor's unpretentious but devastating poetry: "the food that I'm eating / is suddenly tasteless / I know I'm alone...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school356 WordsEven if I've gotten used to living under bureaucratic constraints (hello, [redacted]ean examinations and education system), I savour freedom where I can get it. Its scarcity is precisely what makes me treasure it. So when I discovered Geography, the discipline dedicated to studying every worldly phenomena imaginable, I saw what a goldmine that was, even if there were (justified) murmurs that it was an ill-defined and sprawling course. Geography matters substantially to me, and not just as a 'favourite...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement353 Words
Three words: my cultural schizophrenia. For a while, I thought I misplaced my racial roots! I probably inherited ones resembling a ginseng plant from my Mainland Chinese parents, but I wouldn't know; they might've been denuded by the wave of Westernisation. In the past, I had no clear concept of where my cultural 'homeland' was. Officially, it was my ancestral home in Hangzhou. But in my soul, I know I've imbibed many things that complicate this process of self-discovery for...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school354 WordsIndubitably, Holly Golightly is the role model I wish I'd had when I was young. She would have been the fresh spot of independence I needed, to counter the naivete of giggling Disney princesses. But where I celebrate Holly's pluck and self-possession, I see where Breakfast at Tiffany's has failed in allowing yellowface and feminine conformity into its sublime world. In my lingering moments of fantasy, I dream up my own film remix: where Holly never remains tied to men,...Read more...School Specific Advice
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Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received60 WordsI didn't use a private consultant. My high school consultant was unhelpful, emphasising that I wouldn't make...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders85 WordsJust in my country in particular - the gossip mill in my school did churn out sensational rumours about how even the ethnicity of your...Read more...What I’d change about my application process106 Words(GENUINELY) START EARLIER. Pre-college me would have mocked me for believing in that advice now but I regretted it when I was slaving away in December for the January deadlines. I distinguish...Read more...How I made up for low grades in high school158 WordsI had what might have been considered a valid reason for my failing grade in Economics in 11th grade: personal bereavement. I knew my grade would catch officers' eyes so I emphasised that factor very clearly in Additional Info sections. Tried to get involved...Read more...How I narrowed down my essay topics263 Wordsgeneral advice about writing the essays - someone once told me these things and it's been the best advice i got. try to think of your essay as a way to tell the officers something completely new they wouldn't have expected from you. your formal achievements are for the many other sections; the essay isn't for repeating what other sections could propound already. the Essay is about You As A Person and living, breathing,...Read more...Did you take a gap year? Tell us about your experience.157 Wordsdid not intentionally take a gap 'yah' but as an international student coming from a different school calendar there were 10 months between the end of my exams and the start of college. best moments of my gap year: - developing my new skincare...Read more...High School Performance
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