mello112
mello112,
CU
B.F.A., Music Performance
I am the definition of hard work.
Features Included
2
Essays
11
Schools
1
Scores
1
Advice
1
ECs
1
Sports

Background

Hometown Antioch, California
GenderFemale
EthnicityHispanic
Class of2020
First Gen College StudentYes

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • Stanford University (Stanford, CA)
  • San Diego State University (San Diego, CA)
  • California State University - Long Beach (Long Beach, CA)
  • Northern Arizona University (Flagstaff, AZ)
  • University of Oregon (Eugene, OR)
  • Azusa Pacific University (Azusa, CA)
  • University of California - Los Angeles (Los Angeles, CA)
  • Loyola Marymount University (Los Angeles, CA)
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Chapman University (Orange, CA)

Applied for a B.F.A. in Music Performance

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

Personal Statement
49 Words
Failure experience
Mistakes and failures are personal obstacles that are a common occurrence in the lives of many. Lessons learned from discouraging experiences have shaped me to be the determined and diligent person I am today. When difficult situations or certain obstacles hinder my goals, they only act as further motivation.
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Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
121 Words
I am applying to Chapman because of it’s dynamic and encouraging environment. It has small enough classes to feel close to professors and engaged in the material, but a large amount of opportunities and networking possible in this school helps set the bar high for academic success. I also believe that Chapman has a rigorous undergraduate program, throughout the entire four years. Many schools often have boring and too general academics for the first two years of study. I...
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School Specific Advice

More Essays

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General Admissions Advice

My advice about getting recommenders
162 Words
When choosing someone to write your letter of recommendation, ask yourself the following questions: 1. What does he/she know about me that can attest to my character or academic achievement (are there specific examples that stand out?) 2. Do I have a confident enough relationship with this person to know...
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High School Performance

GPA
3.80
(no specification of weighting)
Rank
N/A
 
Academic Performance in High School Steady

Test Scores

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details1 classes and scores

Sports

SportsDance

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesCharity Drive Organizing
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work

Experience & Awards

Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received
Application Additional Materials

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