yrayyis
yrayyis,
UC Berkeley ‘22
B.S.
Overzealous public speaker
Features Included
4
Essays
1
Schools
3
Scores
6
Advice
8
ECs
0
Sports

Background

Hometown Beijing, California
GenderFemale
EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic
First Gen College StudentNo
English First Language Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken Russian, Mandarin

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)
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University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

Penelope, the first donkey born with long ears, propelled herself towards a lucrative career as herd president, forever modifying the humble species. At nine, this was the short story I devised about how donkeys evolved to have long ears. My naive understanding of genetic heritability and politics apart, I still feel attached to Penelope. She grew into herself with something I desperately lacked: moxie. I was the shy kid terrified to ask the waitress for water, the perpetual new girl...
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Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity
358 Words
I become a play-frame as Little Tiger climbs onto my shoulders. He pulls my hair lightly to balance himself and holds his grip to feel its texture. "Do they have escalators in McDonald's?" He asks eagerly. "Have you been in an elevator?" I start to answer but he cuts me off, louder than before, "Do they have escalators in elevators?" He asks me this every time. He requests my hand to help him get down and commands me to tell...
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Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest
356 Words
Punks in 80's Cuba injected themselves with HIV in protest of a restrictive government and, ironically, for self-preservation. This phenomenon was the focus of my Higher Level IB History internal assessment, examining how Cuban politics, social policies, and international context lead to such a movement. It ended up becoming my favorite academic project to date. Politics has always been significant to me; from covering the recent U.S. Presidential election for various student magazines, and devouring every documentary Youtube has...
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Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance
357 Words
My father passed away last Wednesday; a man of +40 years of tireless humanitarian work and an extensive global footprint was gone in a nefarious incident that sent a woman to jail and left me equally devastated and conflicted. Although certainly not an original sentiment, my relationship with my father was not without its complications- my parents recently separated and he left to the Philippines. Nevertheless, the last week was the most draining and testing of my life. Happening just before...
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School Specific Advice

5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
5 Words
Hipster, driven,...
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General Admissions Advice

Recommended summer activities during high school and college
113 Words
As much as a relaxing summer break sounds fun, don't forget to maximize on your the time! I took college classes at universities, which were a great way to see what college life is...
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How I narrowed down my essay topics
121 Words
Before I started writing anything, I made a big list of every single group I was a part of, every award and recognition I received, every important moment in my life and major story, and key...
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My advice about getting recommenders
189 Words
Think about what teachers/employers have known you for the longest about of time, you feel closest to, etc. Ask them in person if they would be willing to write you a rec, stressing why you chose to ask them (I ask you because I feel as though you have a strong grasp of my abilities/know...
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What set me apart from other applicants
76 Words
I have a diverse background due to my multicultural identity and life experience growing up all over the world. I'm basically a 5th...
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How I made up for low grades in high school
100 Words
Although my grades were pretty high, math was totally my weakness. This was reflected both in my school grades and my math SAT, which were not on par with my...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.15
 
Rank
Top 5%
 
Academic Performance in High School Steady

Test Scores

Highest SAT
1430
 
SAT Score Details
 
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep
SAT IIs

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details6 classes and scores

Sports

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesAfter School Program Coordinator, Theater/Drama, Broadcast Journalism / Media / Television, Debate Club/Team, Model Congress / Model UN, School Newspaper/Magazine/Journalism, Academic, Career Oriented
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Experience & Awards

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