mackenziestorm
mackenziestorm,
U Dayton ‘20
B.B.A., Economics
I probably shouldn't be going to a private school.
Features Included
2
Essays
9
Schools
7
Scores
1
Advice
4
ECs
0
Sports

Background

Hometown Hoffman Estates, Illinois
GenderFemale
EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic
First Gen College StudentNo

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • University of Dayton  (Dayton, OH)
  • Washington University in St. Louis (St. Louis, MO)
  • Loyola University Chicago (Chicago, IL)
  • University of Kansas (Lawrence, KS)
  • University of Minnesota - Twin Cities (Minneapolis, MN)
  • University of Illinois - Urbana-Champaign (Champaign, IL)
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University of Dayton (Dayton, OH)

Applied for a B.B.A. in Economics

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: Other Relative

School Specific Essays

Personal Statement
633 Words
Family background, Overcoming a financial obstacle
Extremely proud of my resourcefulness, I strutted out of the kitchen and into my room. Out of dishwasher detergent, I simply replaced it with dishwashing soap. Why hasn’t anyone else thought of this? I thought. Anyone who has ever worked a dishwasher before knows that these clearly not interchangeable. Sadly, for me and the kitchen rug, I had little experience. A bit later, I walked into the kitchen. The smile slipped from my face and my mouth fell agape...
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Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
404 Words
Explain your interest in the major you selected. Describe an experience related to that area of study, what first introduced you to this field, and/or your future career goals. Limit your response to 300-400 words. My first idea for a business came to me in second grade. Every kid in my school would decorate their lockers with drawings of their names; however, I had access to a color printer at my Uncle’s house. Taking advantage of their fully...
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School Specific Advice

More Essays

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General Admissions Advice

What I like about my school’s location and culture
136 Words
I really love University of Dayton. I'm from Chicago, which makes UD just far enough away that my mom can't drive here every weekend to see me. Our school isn't that far from Cincy or Indy if you really need a...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.30
 
Rank
Top 25%
 
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Some good some bad
Explanation of Low Grades

Test Scores

Highest ACT
30
 
ACT Score Details
 
Other ACT Scores
ACT Prep

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details6 classes and scores

Sports

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesStudent Council / Government, Student Activities Committee, Tutoring/Mentoring, Yearbook

Experience & Awards

Awards Received

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