Melanie
Melanie,
BYU ‘16
B.S., Elementary Education
Family, friends, school, work and God are the most important things to me.
Features Included
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Essays
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Schools
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Scores
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Advice
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ECs
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Sports

Background

Hometown Meridian, Idaho
GenderFemale
EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic
AdmissionEarly Decision
English First Language Yes

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • Brigham Young University (Provo, UT)
  • Brigham Young University - Idaho (Rexburg, ID)
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Brigham Young University (Provo, UT)

Applied for a B.S. in Elementary Education

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: Both Parents

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
196 Words
Failure experience
As an incoming freshmen I had many goals I was going to accomplish. I was going to get involved in choir, student council, and soccer; by my senior year, I was going to be a varsity member in each area. The summer before my freshman year, I started preparing for the soccer tryouts. I attended summer training workouts and practices so when the day of the tryout finally arrived I knew I would make the team. I was astonished when...
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General Admissions Advice

How to increase chances at my school
31 Words
Be involved! Actively serve in your community and school....
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High School Performance

GPA
3.80
(no specification of weighting)
Rank
Top 25%
 
High School TypePublic
Academic Performance in High School Steady

Test Scores

Highest ACT
26
 
ACT Score Details
 

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details2 classes and scores

Sports

SportsSoccer, Tennis

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesStudent Council / Government

Experience & Awards

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