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CMU320065,
CMU ‘20
B.B.A., Business Management
Carnegie Mellon, Studying Business
Features Included
2
Essays
5
Schools
7
Scores
2
Advice
0
ECs
0
Sports

Background

Hometown Beijing, China
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
First Gen College StudentNo

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • Carnegie Mellon University (Pittsburgh, PA)
  • Babson College (Wellesley, MA)
  • Brandeis University (Waltham, MA)
  • University of Richmond (Richmond, VA)
  • University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
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Carnegie Mellon University (Pittsburgh, PA)

Applied for a B.B.A. in Business Management

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

Personal Statement
687 Words
Career aspirations
On Nov. 11th, Singles' Day in China, I was crouching in the bedroom corner without a companion, other than a dim lamp. As a modern lady, I should be independent, mentally muscular, and physically adaptable. Yet, being single was still undesirable, and I could not resist the painful impulse to fill my mouth with sweet chocolate cookies, as if calories were the only source of comfort. So I visited Taobao, China's largest online shopping platform remembering to distribute generous discounts...
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Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
677 Words
CMU along with the Tepper School of Business will be the keys for me to strengthen personal specialty on Internet finance and to achieve social responsibility as a prospective leader. Specifically, it is a fortunate encounter that makes me treasure Tepper’s education on business and leadership, as well as its signature activities matching both my academic pursuit and career goal. Wearing long black boots, a long black coat, and carrying a bit of thrill, I landed at JFK Airport,...
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School Specific Advice

More Essays

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General Admissions Advice

5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
29 Words
Pragmatic, diligent, friendly, "nerdy" (because of the strong CS...
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List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience
96 Words
I interviewed mostly with "InititalView". But for UPenn, I got a face-to-face interview, which did not go great. The interviewer graduated from Penn and worked at Black Stone. I...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.05
 
Rank
N/A
 
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady

Test Scores

Highest SAT
2280
 
SAT Score Details
 
Converted SAT Score1550
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep
SAT IIs

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details4 classes and scores

Sports

Extracurriculars

Experience & Awards

Volunteer Experiences

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