bayalag
bayalag,
Cornell ‘21
B.S., Business Management
A freshman studying Applied Economics and Management at the Dyson School of Cornell University
Features Included
3
Essays
9
Schools
6
Scores
3
Advice
3
ECs
1
Sports

Background

Hometown Ulaanbaatar, Mongolia
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
First Gen College StudentNo

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • Cornell University (Ithaca, NY)
  • University of Southern California (Los Angeles, CA)
  • Boston University (Boston, MA)
  • University of California - San Diego (La Jolla, CA)
  • Brown University (Providence, RI)
  • Columbia University (New York, NY)
  • Northwestern University (Evanston, IL)
  • University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
  • University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)
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Cornell University (Ithaca, NY)

Applied for a B.S. in Business Management

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

PHOW! There goes the horse hoof. Right on my butt. I try not to cry because crying is for kids but tears start cuddling my eyes with so much force that I couldn’t handle it. My fourteen-year old mind starts blaming dad for leaving me with this much hardship and I cry even more.  Mom once joked about abandoning me at the countryside during summer to experience ‘real’ life, but dad took it seriously. My country, Mongolia, is a...
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Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
642 Words
I am probably one of the few people who’s been determined on their career since elementary school. My grandfather always looked happy in my eyes and he was the one who opened all the opportunities I now have. Combined with my interest in mathematics, I dreamed of being an accountant like him so I wanted to study finance since the first time someone asked me “What do you want to be when you grow up?” As the daughter of...
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Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
96 Words
My career goals are related to banking, which is straightforward to learn on the job unlike, for example, computer science, so I believe it is more important for me to learn the skills required to be a successful banker through liberal education. From my research of 20 schools, Brown is the only school that has a liberal approach to education but without specific course requirements. This is specially appealing to me because I will be able to explore my other intellectual...
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School Specific Advice

More Essays

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General Admissions Advice

My advice about getting recommenders
12 Words
Ask early and get...
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How I narrowed down my essay topics
28 Words
Ask your friends or family for keywords that...
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How to deal with the stress of applying to college
24 Words
Start early, don't over-aim (dream schools should...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.32
 
Rank
Top 1%
 
Academic Performance in High School Steady

Test Scores

Highest SAT
1520
 
SAT Score Details
 
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep
SAT IIs

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details3 classes and scores

Sports

SportsSwimming/Diving

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesRotary Club, Math Team, Student Council / Government

Experience & Awards

Awards Received

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