College Admissions Info

New York University, ‘19
BBA, Marketing, Operations Management

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • Test Scores
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 1 supplemental essays
  • 2 advice topics

Student Background

From: New York , New York
Gender: Female
Race/Ethnicity: Asian
Legacy: No
Admission: Early Decision
Applied To: 3 schools
Accepted At: NYU, Northeastern
Denied At:
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Is English First Language: No
Other Language(s) Spoken: Mandarin

Test Scores

Converted SAT Score: 1550
Highest SAT: 2280
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High School Performance

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High School Type: Magnet
AP / IB Classes and Scores:
Academic Performance in High School: Steady

Extracurriculars & Awards

Extracurricular Activities: Dance, French Club, Key Club, Multicultural / International Club, Political Campaign
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College Application Essays

Train whisperer. This pitiful attempt at a nickname resulted in several forced smiles. As witty as (insert name) was, it was difficult for him to devise a clever way to mock the girl who practically had the subway map memorized. We were waiting on the train platform in sweat-drenched shirts emblazoned with Baruch Leadership Academy, as if our matching drawstring backpacks and irritatingly slow pace were not enough to make every passerby aware that we were together. The only thing...

Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
21 Words
I talked about the community at NYU Stern by drawing from my personal observations/experiences with the people in the school.

Additional Essay Details:
400 Words
The quality of a school's education is undoubtedly the most important factor in evaluating schools. The undergraduate experience is only worthwhile if students can leave fully prepared to succeed in the real world, allowing them to lead positive change in their communities. I believe Stern can offer me the skills and environment necessary to become a great leader because its student body is especially driven, but supportive, as well. Rather than worrying about the cutthroat environment characteristic of most top...

College Admissions Advice

Recommended summer activities during high school and college
213 Words
Do something that really sets you apart. Anyone can participate in a general academic program at a local school, and many applicants to top schools probably do. Find something more suited to your interests, whether it be participating a business plan competition or helping to run local Copwatch events. Remember that what you do doesn't necessarily have to do with what you plan on...

What set me apart from other applicants
123 Words
I really got to know my school beforehand. By way of the New York dance community, I managed to make many friends at NYU (and particularly Stern) and I had the opportunity to learn about the school...