College Admissions Info

University of Pennsylvania, ‘19
BBA, Entrepreneurship

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • Test Scores
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 1 supplemental essays
  • 5 advice topics

Student Background

Proud to be a Quaker and serve Business Professionals of America as the 2015-2016 National Secondary Parliamentarian.
From: Bernalillo , New Mexico
Gender: Male
Race/Ethnicity: Hispanic
Legacy: No
Admission: Regular Decision
Applied To: 5 schools
Accepted At: New Mexico, GCU, Purdue, UPenn
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Is English First Language: Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken: Spanish

Test Scores

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High School Performance

GPA, Weighted
Top 1%
High School Type: Public
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Academic Performance in High School: Steady
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Extracurriculars & Awards

Sports: Soccer
Extracurricular Activities: Student Council / Government, National Honor Society, School Newspaper/Magazine/Journalism, Mathematics, Engineering, Science, and Achievement (MESA), Library Volunteer, School Theater/Plays, Spanish Club, Tutoring/Mentoring, Mathematics, Engineering, Science, and Achievement (MESA)
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College Application Essays

Personal Statement: Story central to identity
658 Words
I am the product of a Hispanic Christian family and, as expected, many of my views are traditional and I am faithful to my religion. As a Christian, I firmly believe I must not judge and should love and respect everyone-that is, without a doubt, my ultimate virtue; however, sincere tolerance and acceptance were once abstract to me. I felt prejudice toward students who cause trouble and do not perform well, I used to completely ignore other points of view,...

Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
19 Words
I wrote about why I chose The University of Pennsylvania while adding reasons why I am a strong candidate.

Additional Essay Details:
611 Words
The Wharton School is my preferred choice of the institutions that I am applying to. Its rich history and academic reputation draw me far away from home and to the east coast. I have remained dedicated to my education and solid in my pursuit of the American dream, allowed to us by our founding fathers, such as the University of Pennsylvania's founder, Benjamin Franklin. I have successfully campaigned for numerous leadership positions. I have been the Editor-in-Chief of my school's...

College Admissions Advice

What set me apart from other applicants
48 Words
I have never been afraid of chasing new opportunities. I don't let fear stop...

How I chose schools to apply to
17 Words
I had to first define...

My advice about getting recommenders
49 Words
Both credentials and relation to you matter. Try to balance it. For example, I chose...

What I’d change about my application process
25 Words
I would definitely start earlier before school becomes...

5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
6 Words
Ambitious, social,...