karenlu653,
Yale
B.S., Economics
Deeply curious, love to learn, and is happiest eating.
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Class of2024
First Gen College StudentYes
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Yale University (New Haven, CT)
Applied for a B.S. in Economics
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Personal Statement663 WordsChinese heritage, Creative personal story, Development of personal values, Diversity statement, Embarrassing mistake, Embracing your heritage, Family background, Feeling out of place, Issue of personal significance, Love of outdoors, Love of writing, Movie or book that changed you, Running, Story central to identity, Volunteer/public interest work“Manager to Checkout-7, we got a problem,” the cashier calls over the intercom. The bottle-blond cashier—Erica, her nametag reads—huffs impatiently and examines her scarlet nails. Behind us is a line of grumbling customers, shifting from one foot to the other, annoyance emanating from every pore. I observe all of this in shamed silence, arms crossed as if it would protect me from the accusing stares. The cause of the turmoil? The colorful pieces of paper lying innocuously on...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school249 WordsEven in the darkest of moments, I have found the strength to continue to be happy because of what I love: running. I first began running as a hobby, as a way of relieving stress. Soon, I began to run even on days when I was content. Sometimes I run in the mornings, to witness the sound of chirping and the promise of a rising sun. Sometimes I run in the nights, illuminated by the artificial glow of the streetlamps...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement248 WordsIn my school, we all speak a common tongue—the language that comes from diversity. Although my school is a mix of people from every continent—French, Arabic, Hispanic, Chinese, Australian, Nigerian, and Native American—we are united by our love of beaches and our fear of hurricanes. Although we may differ in customs and habits, and in fashion and native language, we share the belief that from diversity springs harmony. It’s more than a school—it’s a...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay636 WordsWhen I looked at colleges, I looked for those that taught students to observe the world around them and translate their knowledge into service. I didn’t want to just show up to class, copy down notes, then walk into an exam and regurgitate everything I knew onto a piece of paper. I want a more engaging learning experience, one that is not defined by tests and notes but, rather, discussion and collaboration. Carnegie Mellon is that college. As someone...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity162 WordsSome of the greatest political and social successes come not from bitter battles with Congress but from one of the most powerful institutions—the Supreme Court. The political power that the legal system wields was what first drew me to that area. I became an officer in my school’s pre-law society, but the guest attorneys and speakers only piqued my curiosity. I decided to join mock trial and moot court, but competing as a witness and as a lawyer...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest306 WordsReading Barthes's Mythologies was an eye-opening experience. The fact that wrestling was the topic for theoretical discussion piqued my curiosity. The intellectual beauty and lyricism as Barthes explored humanity through the banal topic of wrestling astounded me. English became more than simply a study of language and meaning—it was a study of the past; a study of the various geographical, historical and social conditions surrounding literary production and reception. There were so many ways to approach a text, from...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay298 WordsWhen I looked at colleges, I looked for those that taught students to observe the world around them and translate their knowledge into service. I didn’t want to just show up to class, copy down notes, then walk into an exam and regurgitate everything I knew onto a piece of paper. I want an engaging learning experience, one defined by discussion and collaboration. I want to be in an environment where no matter what I do, I will transform...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school982 WordsRoute 66 It’s not a marked path or road. You certainly won’t find it in Google Maps. But for me, it’s Route 66. It’s sand and crushed stone, mixed with water to form a sidewalk roughly 3 feet in width and exactly 5.6 km long. It starts at my house—bricks sloping downwards from the driveway to the concrete sidewalk—winds alongside the cookie-cutter suburban homes, follows an asphalt road, and cuts through a nature preserve. The path completes the...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay409 WordsWhen I looked at colleges, I looked for those that taught students to observe the world around them and translate their knowledge into service. I didn’t want to just show up to class, copy down notes, then walk into an exam and regurgitate everything I knew onto a piece of paper. As someone who thrives in new places and situations, NYU beckons my curiosity with its numerous opportunities and locations for study abroad, internships, and global campuses. As someone...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Scholarship application798 Words
2. Describe how receiving the George W. Jenkins Scholarship would impact your life.
3. Describe any special circumstances, specifically any history of overcoming significant adversity.My parents, both of whom mainly speak Chinese, affectionately nickname me Fanyi—or “Translator.” It’s because I often assist my mother in typing out emails, texts, and documents as she is not as well-versed in English as I am. However, my fluency hasn’t always been that way. I was born in New York City, but went to live with my grandparents in China when I was 1. Chinese became my first and only language I knew. When I came...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity403 WordsSome students struggle with simply writing an essay, but in Moot Court, I was expected to write a twenty page appellate brief in two weeks using proper court language. A tall order for an average sized high schooler. I first began Moot Court during my sophomore year, and it wasn’t the best of beginnings. It was difficult for me to understand the basic concept of actus reus, much less try to argue whether reasonable suspicion or probable cause is...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay986 WordsWhen I looked at colleges, I looked for those that taught students to observe the world around them and translate their knowledge into service. I desire learning and information for my life fulfillment. I don’t want to just show up to class, copy down notes, then walk into an exam and regurgitate everything I knew onto a piece of paper. For the past twelve years, the majority of my educational experience has been required rather opposed to desired. I...Read more...School Specific Advice
How to increase chances at my school343 WordsIf you're reading this, it's because you love Yale (or if you just want to get in, that's okay too). Let's talk about how to maximize your chances of getting in by letting your passion shine through. Firstly, remember that it's all about showing, not just telling. Your essays are your stage, and this is your chance to showcase your love for Yale. When it comes to your supplemental essays, take each word as precious real estate and make them count. Highlight how your personality, experiences, and aspirations align with Yale's values and culture. Craft your "why Yale" short answer...Read more...5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)364 Words**Curious:** A Yale student's curiosity is a flame that never dims. Long after the bell rings, you'll find them huddled around a professor, posing intricate questions that spiral into late-night discussions. But don't be surprised if you overhear them shifting from Nietzsche to debating the perfect pizza toppings, all while sharing a table at the dining hall. Their thirst for knowledge isn't limited to the classroom; it spills into the most unexpected corners of life. **Ambitious:** Ambition courses through the veins of every Yale student, each striving to fulfill the legacy of their alma mater. The pathways they choose are...Read more...My favorite course thus far, and why234 WordsBioethics taught by Professor Steven Latham effortlessly clinched the title of my favorite Yale class. This choice wasn't just a fluke; it was backed by several factors that made this experience genuinely remarkable. Professor Latham's teaching style was a standout feature. His knack for simplifying intricate ethical questions into relatable examples created an environment where even the most complex topics felt approachable. The class discussions he fostered, enriched...Read more...What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school395 WordsAlright, gather 'round for some real talk about nailing that "Why Us" essay for Yale. It's like finding the perfect slice of apizza (note the "A" in apizza!) in "America's Best Small City" full of (a)pizzerias – you gotta know what toppings you're looking for. So, let's dish out some ideas that might just hit the salty spot. First up, Yale's all about mixing things up. You could dig into how you're itching to fuse your love for tech with your passion for social justice. Imagine the innovation you could cook up when you're surrounded by bright minds from all...Read more...The academic rigor of a typical course load or in my major245 WordsFor an economics major at Yale, it's one of the most popular majors (~30% of Yalies major in it, and almost 70% of Yale students have taken some economics or economics-adjacent class). It's popular because we have truly famous professors (I personally have been taught by 2 Nobel Laureates), but also because it's comparatively less rigorous on coursework and course load, but still comprehensive. Yalies like to take it so that they have the...Read more...More Essays
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General Admissions Advice
What set me apart from other applicants228 WordsWhat truly set me apart from other candidates was my unwavering passion. I wasn't out to impress anyone with cookie-cutter narratives or flashy buzzwords. Instead, I poured my heart into my application, making it a canvas that painted a vivid picture of who I am. I knew that trying to mold myself into what I thought admission officers wanted would be a disservice to my uniqueness. I...Read more...Misconceptions I had about college before attending285 WordsBefore stepping foot on campus, I had my fair share of misconceptions about college life. I used to think that getting into a college was like winning a prize, and that the more prestigious the institution, the better. College isn't a trophy to be claimed; it's a puzzle where the pieces need to fit just right. Applying to a slew of top-tier schools might sound impressive, but it's not a guarantee you'll get accepted everywhere. The real magic happens when the colleges see not...Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college252 WordsDealing with the stress of college applications requires a strategic game plan, and being organized is your MVP move. Seriously, your to-do lists are about to become your new best friends. Divide and conquer should be your mantra – create separate tabs or folders for each college application, and then map out a checklist for each one. This detailed plan should include everything from the main application and application fee to those pesky supplemental essays, teacher...Read more...Did you take a gap year? Tell us about your experience.394 WordsConsidering a gap year before or even right in the middle of college? It's quite the decision, but let me tell you, it can be a game-changer. I did it during my college years, but I think starting before college can be a great decision and a way to prevent mental burnout. The question is, what did I do during my time off? Rot in bed and watch anime all day of course, duh! (just kidding.) I did a lot of serious stuff as well. Let's start with the GRE prep. Yeah, I get it, standardized tests are no one's...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders248 WordsSecuring stellar recommendation letters is a pivotal part of your college application journey. Let's start with the key ingredient: the recommenders. When picking them, think quality over quantity. Go for individuals who know your academic and personal sides like a pro. It could be that science teacher who's seen you ace every lab or the club advisor who's seen you organize events flawlessly. Have candid chats with them about your plans and dreams,...Read more...My insights about AP (Advanced Placement) courses and exams332 WordsTaking as many AP exams as you can certainly has its merits, but it's essential to do so thoughtfully and strategically. Balancing this pursuit with your GPA, extracurricular commitments, and personal growth is crucial for a well-rounded high school experience. Firstly, AP exams can demonstrate your academic prowess and dedication to challenging yourself. They showcase your willingness to tackle college-level material and your commitment to learning. However, remember that quality matters more than quantity. It's better to excel in a few AP courses than to spread yourself too thin across many. A strong performance in a handful of AP exams...Read more...High School Performance
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