B.S., Business Administration and Management
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Hometown Sherborn, Massachusetts
EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic
Class of2022
First Gen College StudentNo

Results, Essays, and Advice

Waitlisted or Withdrew
  • Quinnipiac University (Hamden, CT)
  • Boston University (Boston, MA)
  • Suffolk University (Boston, MA)
  • University of Connecticut (Storrs, CT)
  • University of Massachusetts - Amherst (Amherst, MA)
  • University of Vermont (Burlington, VT)
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Quinnipiac University (Hamden, CT)

Applied for a B.S. in Business Administration and Management

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

Share an essay on any topic of your choice. It can be one you’ve already written, one that responds to a different prompt, or one of your own design.
The summer of 2017, was without a doubt, the most boring two months that I can remember. Not to say that I didn’t do anything over the summer, just that I remember the days where I was stuck at home more than the few that I was actually away on vacation. Most days consisted of the same mundane routine: wake up, brush teeth, eat breakfast, eat lunch, eat dinner, and sleep. I would read books or watch TV or go...
Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
252 Words
What about being a student at Boston University excites you most?
Should I be accepted into BU, I would be most excited about starting a new chapter of my life in such widely-known and acclaimed school. There are many statistics praising BU for it's high quality academics, campus life, student experiences, and more. One thing that really caught my eye was BU's global experience. There are opportunities for almost every program of study to travel and study abroad, which is something I need to do in college. I also think it...
Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
101 Words
Please tell us why you want to attend UMass Amherst?
I would like to attend UMass Amherst because of its nursing program, which I think I can highly benefit from in pursuing my nursing career. One thing that stands out to me at the UMass Amherst College of Nursing is the small classes. I learn much more and am able to focus better in small classes where I can feel a sense of community rather than large classes where I do not easily get to know people. I would also...
Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest
100 Words
Please tell us why you chose the Majors you did?
I chose the majors Nursing and Public Health Sciences because I very much would like to pursue a career in healthcare and medicine. I want to learn about the human body and use my knowledge to help others. My first choice major is Nursing because a nurse is one occupation that I have always thought about eventually taking up. I do not want to be a surgeon or have an MD or a PhD; for me, that is too much...

School Specific Advice

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General Admissions Advice

How to deal with the stress of applying to college
179 Words
I was one of those people who had no idea what I wanted to do when I grew up, which gets very stressful around this time. I had so many interests (criminology, medicine, law, business), but I was confusing my interests with my career options. Just because I was interested in a subject didn't...
How I narrowed down my essay topics
218 Words
In school, we looked at sample essays for college. Many of them are beautifully written inspirational, life changing moments. As I read over them, I thought to myself "What will I write about? I really haven't had any life changing moments that shaped me as a person." I hadn't had any special experiences that left a lasting impact on me, no one in my family...
Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received
132 Words
We have a family friend who used to work in admissions at Boston College so we reached out to her for help in the application process. While I did not use all of her advice, it was very helpful to...

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