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Class of2022
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New York University (New York, NY)
Applied for a B.S. in Chemistry
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Personal Statement97 WordsAthletic achievement, Development of personal values, Extracurricular passion, Failure experience, Issue of personal significance, One moment that changed you, Overcoming a health obstacle, Overcoming personal struggle, Reaching a goal, Role model/inspiration“Twelve one-hundred freestyle on a one-minute thirty interval!” shouts my coach. I frantically swim to the back of Lane 1. I watch as everyone lines up before me, leaving me disappointedly and embarrassingly last in the lane. I’ll admit it—that first day of practice, I quit multiple times. As everyone else continued swimming, I leaned against the pool wall, attempting to catch my breath. And for that, my coach, Eric, gave me some tough love. “Unless I see you...Read more...Personal Statement144 WordsCareer aspirations, Creative personal story, Development of personal values, Extracurricular passion, Failure experience, Issue of personal significance, Overcoming personal struggle, Role model/inspiration, Story central to identityThe comfort of my mother’s arms weren’t enough to stop my five-year-old self from bursting into tears at the sight of Geddes Pond in Michigan. I trembled with gut-wrenching fear of drowning in it. At age ten, my blood-curdling scream rippled through Hershey Park as the Wild Mouse rollercoaster swerved around the sharp corner. I cried for the ride to stop, screaming louder at each brusque turn as nausea overcame me. And at the age of 14, I squealed...Read more...School Specific Advice
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How I narrowed down my essay topics62 WordsBrainstorm, brainstorm, brainstorm. Think of significant moments in your life. They don't have to be big, grandiose moments....Read more...How to deal with the stress of applying to college119 WordsStart early!!! I cannot stress this enough. I started my essays in the summer which in retrospect was a great decision. Some of my friends had started their essays during the first semester of senior...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders76 WordsAsk someone who likes you and can truly speak to your personality. It helps if they know you beyond just the classroom,...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received50 WordsNo. I didn't use them. I already had some ideas for essays and I thought...Read more...What I’d change about my application process53 WordsI wish I wasn't so focused on getting into the so-called prestigious colleges. It's rather self-deprecating...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.64(equivalent to 4.00 unweighted)RankTop 5%
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