College Admissions Info

University of Phoenix, ‘17
Health and Medical Administrative Services

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 1 supplemental essays
  • 5 advice topics

Student Background

Recent grad in Health/Wellness Admin and ready for anything!
From: Adelanto , California
Gender: Female
First Gen College Student: No
Race/Ethnicity: Black / African American
Legacy: No
Admission: Transfer
Accepted At:
Denied At:
Waitlisted At:
Withdrew From:
Is English First Language: Yes

Test Scores

SAT Prep:

High School Performance

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Bottom Half
Academic Performance in High School: Some good some bad

Extracurriculars & Awards

Sports: Volleyball

College Application Essays

Personal Statement for Phoenix: Family member’s disability
812 Words
There are times in life when the things that we say, do, think, and portray to the world comes back to us in a full circle. The life forces that are around us as life lessons are there to show us right from wrong, good and bad, and the consequences that follow. When people do not take care of their bodies, especially the inside; the organs tend to fail. The kidneys control the urine The reason for the beginning paragraph...

Supplemental Essay for Phoenix: Other
1043 Words
In dealing with the correctional facilities worldwide, there are so many issues facing not just in the system, but with the countless men and women inside the walls. The officers, administrators, judges, attorneys, public defenders all have a tough task to manage the daily task of keeping a regular and constant upkeep of all the inmates. There is not enough money to spread around to all of these institutional entities and yet, there are still an insurmountable number still encompassing...

College Admissions Advice

How to approach transferring schools
61 Words
Take your time and listen to your admissions counselor. He/she is the first person you will meet...

What I’d change about my application process
62 Words
I would not change a thing about University of Phoenix-Arizona application process. It goes by so smoothly and they...

Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received
86 Words
I have an admissions counselor and she is great. she calls weekly to see how things are going during your first course to make sure you...

Why I ultimately chose my school
83 Words
I chose this school because of the ease of getting to the work in the portal. I love online classes and they have made it...

Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice
92 Words
I did not do loans and I did not get approved the first time I tried. So I am here on grants and I am applying for scholarships....