e.malmquist,
Occidental
B.A., Psychology
An Ohio student who had aspirations to attend college in California, and achieved them.
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12
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Background
Hometown
Aurora, Ohio
GenderMale
EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic
AdmissionRegular Decision
Class of2019
English First Language
Yes
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
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Occidental College (Los Angeles, CA)
Applied for a B.A. in Psychology
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At age sixteen, I was reaching the end of my sophomore year of high school. Unlike most of my friends at this age, I had no car, no license, and a newfound responsibility: a job. My parents had told me that if I wanted adult privileges like a car and license, I would need a job to pay for them. So as my sophomore year came to a close, my new job at Target began. Each week, for twenty to...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay240 WordsThe first thing that drew me to Occidental was the impressive 10:1 student-faculty ratio and small class sizes. As a student, I’ve always learned best when I am given individual attention. I find that I feel more comfortable asking questions and speaking my mind in rooms that don't contain hundreds of people. At Oxy I feel confident knowing that I will be treated as more than just a student who's paying tuition. Another thing that set Oxy above the rest...Read more...Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school210 WordsUp until this year, when confronted with the question of what interested me academically, I didn’t have an answer. I had gone through many courses in my high school career but nothing except biology ever seemed to stick. I loved science, and my AP biology class opened my eyes to a world of new and exciting things. But even then, things always felt kind of lacking. It wasn’t until I began my AP psychology class this year that...Read more...Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school253 WordsAs my time in high school comes to a close, there’s one particular book that I keep coming back to again and again. During my tenth grade year, I read the book Into the Wild by Jon Krakauer. This book entails the journey of Christopher McCandless, a young man who leaves behind all that he has ever known to search for his true self in the Alaskan wilderness. At first I took the book at face value, and it...Read more...Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school249 WordsIf you were to see me in my classroom or my bedroom, one thing you’d probably notice is that I like to keep things orderly. The books and pencils on my desk are strategically organized, along with the clock and lamp on my nightstand. A personal idiosyncrasy I’d use to define me is my need for things to be perfect. Even as a kid I always kept my Hotwheels and stuffed animals neatly in order. Being a perfectionist...Read more...Supplemental Essay Diversity statement556 WordsGrowing up as a kid being gay was a subject nobody ever really talked about. When the word did come up in conversation it always seemed to carry a negative connotation with it. Sometimes it was an insult thrown around the school locker room and other times it was used to portray a gay character in that week’s television show. When I was fourteen I realized that those characters on television and I might be more alike than I...Read more...Supplemental Essay Diversity statement479 WordsGrowing up I always knew something about me was different. It wasn’t until I was in eighth grade that I realized what it was: I’m gay. It all finally clicked for me one day during track practice when I caught myself staring down the star of the hundred meter dash. I remember how uneasy I felt those next few weeks as I carried around this newfound information. Everything that I’d ever encountered about being gay seemed to...Read more...General Admissions Advice
Why I ultimately chose my school44 WordsI ultimately chose Occidental College because it was the most affordable and I...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college46 WordsThe most easily recommended summer activity is to find a job. This is an...Read more...5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)32 WordsStudents at Occidental College are intelligent, personable, laid back, quirky,...Read more...What I like about my school’s location and culture47 WordsBeing in the heart of Los Angeles, California, Occidental offers a variety of cultures...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders55 WordsFind teachers who you got along with and who's class you excelled in. Don't pick that teacher...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice34 WordsDo your best to achieve optimal grades and GPA because...Read more...What set me apart from other applicants54 WordsNothing particularly set me apart from any other student, I just played upon the fact that...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to47 WordsI chose my schools to apply to based off of their location and if...Read more...Why I declined other schools39 WordsI declined other schools mainly because of affordability. Being an out of...Read more...What I now know about my school that I never would have known prior to enrolling21 WordsPresident Obama went to Occidental College...Read more...What I’d change about my application process63 WordsI would make sure I got my applications done a lot sooner. When you first start applying the deadlines...Read more...Post-college plans11 WordsI plan to...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.31RankTop 25%
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