aaghoshh
aaghoshh,
NYU ‘22
B.S., Business Management
I am business student studying Marketing and Data Science fascinated by sociology and psychology.
Features Included
3
Essays
5
Schools
5
Scores
5
Advice
2
ECs
1
Sports

Background

Hometown Bridgewater, New Jersey
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
First Gen College StudentNo

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • New York University (New York, NY)
  • University of Michigan - Ann Arbor (Ann Arbor, MI)
  • Rutgers, State University of New Jersey - New Brunswick (Piscataway, NJ)
  • University of Texas - Austin (Austin, TX)
  • Villanova University (Villanova, PA)
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New York University (New York, NY)

Applied for a B.S. in Business Management

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

Reflect on a time when you questioned or challenged a belief or idea. What prompted your thinking? What was the outcome?
Love is not all you need. Sunny was the first child I met at Mother Teresa’s missionary in Kolkata, India. He launched his six year old, bony body around my leg when I first walked out of the staff room. When I looked down, the only thing I could see was his buzz-cut of black hair with a bald circle in the front of his head. As I wiggled my foot, I was met with uncontrollable laughter and four...
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Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
404 Words
Why NYU?
For the past eleven years of my life, I have watched my mother balance working a nine-to-five job, raising two children, and establishing a nonprofit organization. When she was not driving me to dance practice, she was on the phone delegating a task to Medha USA. When elected president of the organization, it was her words: “It’s like I’m running a business” that struck me. As I became more involved with the organization, I began to comprehend the...
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Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance
146 Words
If you could only do one of the activities you have listed in the Activities section of your Common Application, which one would you keep doing? Why?
My interest in singing stemmed from my parent’s DVD compilation of old Bollywood hits. Even from a young age, the idea of tempo and tone intrigued me. I would sing along to songs whose lyrics had no meaning to me, as they were in Hindi, but whose harmonies immediately connected with me. Singing along to good music, no matter the language, is a human instinct. I progressed from casually belting Bollywood songs while doing math homework to performing Broadway...
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School Specific Advice

The stress level and competitiveness of a typical student at my school
122 Words
NYU is known for its competitiveness, however unlike other universities is it is not as competitive about academics as it is about internships. Being in the heart of the city we have more access to companies than...
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How to increase chances at my school
108 Words
NYU Stern School of Business was my dream school. I believe what made me stand out was that I did not focus on what I thought the school wanted to hear. I...
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More Essays

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General Admissions Advice

What set me apart from other applicants
113 Words
What set me apart from the other applicants was that I did not tell my schools what I thought they wanted to hear. There is no formula of the perfect student that gets accepted...
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My advice about getting recommenders
80 Words
Look for the teachers that know you the best, not just the teachers who gave you a good grade. The best recommendations are ones...
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Misconceptions I had about college before attending
115 Words
It is not necessary to approach college with the same competitiveness and ferocity as many of us did in high school. I thought that I had to join every club and get on the executive...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.30
(equivalent to 3.70 unweighted)
Rank
Top 10%
 
Academic Performance in High School Low at first but improved

Test Scores

Highest SAT
1510
 
SAT Score Details
 
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details4 classes and scores

Sports

SportsTennis

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesDance, DECA (Distributive Education Clubs of America)

Experience & Awards

Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received

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