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LMU50139,
LMU ‘19
B.S., Engineering Mechanics
18 year old girl on her way to LMU next semester. I was top ten in my high school, varsity swim and water polo captain as well as Vice President for two clubs. I know anything is possible and I love to help others! :)
Features Included
3
Essays
7
Schools
6
Scores
1
Advice
2
ECs
2
Sports

Background

Hometown Granada Hills, California
GenderFemale
EthnicityHispanic
AdmissionRegular Decision
English First Language Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken Spanish

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • Loyola Marymount University (Los Angeles, CA)
  • University of California - Irvine (Irvine, CA)
  • University of California - Riverside (Riverside, CA)
  • California State University - Northridge (Los Angeles, CA)
  • University of California - Los Angeles (Los Angeles, CA)
  • University of Southern California (Los Angeles, CA)
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Loyola Marymount University (Los Angeles, CA)

Applied for a B.S. in Engineering Mechanics

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: Other Relative

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
566 Words
Story central to identity
Webster's Dictionary defines determination as "a quality that makes you continue trying to do or achieve something that is difficult." This is exactly how I would choose to describe myself because it embodies my work ethic and who I am as a whole. I dislike having to give up on anything or to quit on a task simply because it is difficult. Challenging myself is something that I have done in high school frequently, especially in the sports I participate...
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Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school
435 Words
The world that I come from has been a huge influence on the person I am today. The one place that has influenced me the most is my high school. Since freshman year, my high school has been continually challenging my academic skills, pushing my limits in all athletics I participate in, and also helping shape me as a person while I participate in many clubs and volunteer in school organizations. My school has been a place that has challenged...
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Supplemental Essay Scholarship application
145 Words
My primary goal for going to college is not just to go to class, get good grades, go home, study and do that for four years. However, my goal is to enrich myself into the real world and become a valuable member of my community. Yes, one of my goals is to go to class and earn good grades, but beyond that I wish to go farther. One of my many goals is to gain an internship in research for...
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General Admissions Advice

What I’d change about my application process
52 Words
If I were to change anything about my application, I would have made it a lot...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.50
 
Rank
Top 5%
 
High School TypeReligious
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades

Test Scores

Highest SAT
1890
 
SAT Score Details
 
Converted SAT Score1340

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details10 classes and scores

Sports

SportsSwimming/Diving (Recruited), Water Polo (Recruited)

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesSpanish Club, Tutoring/Mentoring

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers

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