College Admissions Info

Loyola Marymount University, ‘19
BS, Engineering Mechanics

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • Test Scores
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 2 supplemental essays
  • 1 advice topics

Student Background

18 year old girl on her way to LMU next semester. I was top ten in my high school, varsity swim and water polo captain as well as Vice President for two clubs. I know anything is possible and I love to help others! :)
From: Granada Hills , California
Gender: Female
Race/Ethnicity: Hispanic
Legacy: Other Family Member
Admission: Regular Decision
Applied To: 8 schools
Accepted At: LMU, UC Irvine, UC Riverside, CLU, CSUN
Denied At:
Waitlisted At:
Withdrew From:
Is English First Language: Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken: Spanish

Test Scores

Converted SAT Score: 1340
Highest SAT: 1890

High School Performance

GPA, Weighted
Top 5%
High School Type: Religious
AP / IB Classes and Scores:
Academic Performance in High School: Steady
Explanation of Any Low Grades:

Extracurriculars & Awards

Sports: Swimming/Diving (Recruited), Water Polo (Recruited)
Extracurricular Activities: Spanish Club, Tutoring/Mentoring
How Spent Summers:

College Application Essays

Personal Statement: Story central to identity
566 Words
Webster's Dictionary defines determination as "a quality that makes you continue trying to do or achieve something that is difficult." This is exactly how I would choose to describe myself because it embodies my work ethic and who I am as a whole. I dislike having to give up on anything or to quit on a task simply because it is difficult. Challenging myself is something that I have done in high school frequently, especially in the sports I participate...

Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school
435 Words
The world that I come from has been a huge influence on the person I am today. The one place that has influenced me the most is my high school. Since freshman year, my high school has been continually challenging my academic skills, pushing my limits in all athletics I participate in, and also helping shape me as a person while I participate in many clubs and volunteer in school organizations. My school has been a place that has challenged...

Supplemental Essay: Scholarship application
145 Words
My primary goal for going to college is not just to go to class, get good grades, go home, study and do that for four years. However, my goal is to enrich myself into the real world and become a valuable member of my community. Yes, one of my goals is to go to class and earn good grades, but beyond that I wish to go farther. One of my many goals is to gain an internship in research for...

College Admissions Advice

What I’d change about my application process
52 Words
If I were to change anything about my application, I would have made it a lot...