cheap_asian,
UC Berkeley
B.S., Health Care Management
First-gen (& mid student) Asian kid defies affirmative action
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Advice
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Background
Hometown
Mission Viejo, California
GenderMale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2026
First Gen College StudentYes
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
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Tap/click a school logo above to view essays and advice specific to that school.University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)
Applied for a B.S. in Health Care Management
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
Some students have a background, identity, interest, or talent that is so meaningful they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story.Personal Statement663 WordsFamily background, First in family to college, Interest in other academic subject, Overcoming a financial obstacle"What was it like in re-education camp, Auntie Three?". My eight-year-old eyes sparkled with curiosity as my aunt embarked on yet another fable about her trials and tribulations in the ‘Hanoi Hilton’. "Ohh… I was relieved to have friends during those times," she chuckled in Vietnamese. “I was lucky even to have sold enough sticky rice to bribe the guards!” On other occasions, my aunt would reminisce with stories of hiding from communist tax collectors, selling playing cards smuggled from...Read more...Describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity or worked to overcome an educational barrier you have faced.Personal Statement135 WordsExtracurricular passion, Interest in other academic subject, Interest in tech/engineering, Overcoming a financial obstacleI’ve developed a seemingly-harmless habit: loopholing my life. Whether it’s debugging, automating, or multitasking, I hunt for modern solutions in an archaic past. A middle-man merchant of an underlying Web2.0, soon Web3.0 economy. I’m a nerd, I know. Perhaps you’ve heard it: ‘The Metaverse’. In an era of decentralization, I picked up my rustic keyboard to join the front-lines in innovation. You’d be surprised how ‘Atomic Habits’ transforms you (a gem, but a one-time read)....Read more...What would you say is your greatest talent or skill? How have you developed and demonstrated that talent over time?Personal Statement154 WordsCareer aspirations, Interest in other academic subject, Overcoming a financial obstacle, Reaching a goal, Story central to identityI sell opportunities for a living. While others sell Oreos, I sell vending machines. While others sell services like cleaning your car, I sell the car wash. Every weekend, I lurk my favorite website: 'BizBuySell.com.' As much as I'd like to buy my own coin-laundromat, a 17-year old dependent living on reduced lunch waivers probably can’t. Can’t or won’t? Most proletariats see opportunities but are disuaded by technical hurdles, hence the aphorism, "the rich get...Read more...Describe a topic, idea, or concept you find so engaging that it makes you lose all track of time. Why does it captivate you? What or who do you turn to when you want to learn more?Personal Statement244 WordsCareer aspirations, Interest in other academic subject, Role model/inspirationNo matter how long the days get, I can always find solace in hearing the words, "I'm out." Whether it's cutting a royalty deal with the devil, Mr. Wonderful, or listening to Daymond John's half-baked advice, I must get my weekly dose of Shark Tank, 8/7c, every Friday. In my second-ever TV experience, my seven-year-old self witnessed the embodiment of capitalism, all from a 3.5-inch iPhone 4S. This marked the start of my love-and-hate relationship with the 'American Dream'. But...Read more...Describe how you have taken advantage of a significant educational opportunity or worked to overcome an educational barrier you have faced.Personal Statement261 WordsControversial topic, Development of personal values, Interest in med/sci/math, Story central to identity, Volunteer/public interest workI gasped at the stinging pain of the patient’s back: red streaks lined the shoulders, abdomen, and spine. The lubricated metal spoon pressed against an undisturbed-yet-irritated patient’s back in an attempt to push out the illness. My Medical/Hospital Careers internship's third week. Instead of Western antibiotic treatment, Eastern medicine practitioners recommend coining as an effective treatment for fevers. Thus, what fascinates me is striking a balance between Eastern and Western medicine at the intersection of business and...Read more...What is it about Yale that has led you to apply? (125 words or fewer)*Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay127 Words
My interest in Yale starts with a manuscript. Charles-Edward Winslow's manuscript to be exact. Winslow carefully crafted its composition while drafted as part of the lost generation in WWI by day, and legislator at the J.B. Pierce Laboratory at night. When you look up a trailblazer, Winslow's face should appear: Founder of CEA Winslow award, (Public Health's Nobel prize)l; Consultant to the World Health Organization; First male elected as the superintendent of the Yale Hospital School of Nursing....Read more...1. What inspires you?Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school36 Words
Alexa, Amazon Echo. Audiobooks, podcasts, music all in a portable cylinder. Makes you wonder, is this the advent of tech? Like a genie, a library's information in an utter.I just have to ask questions.Read more...2. You are teaching a new Yale course. What is it called?Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school22 Words
Insurance companies HATE this weird trick... Medical Tourism: The clickbait economics behind the U.S.'s medical-industrial complex vs. developing nations.Read more...3. Yale’s residential colleges regularly host conversations with guests representing a wide range of experiences and accomplishments. What person, past or present, would you invite to speak and what would you ask them to discuss?*Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school35 Words
1962's JFK. First, to thank him: the first president to put Medicare on the national agenda. But why? With his 2nd term election coming up, why campaign for something so controversial for his time?Read more...Considering the specific undergraduate school you have selected, how will you explore your academic and intellectual interests at the University of Pennsylvania? For students applying to the coordinated dual-degree and specialized programs, please answer these questions in regard to your single-degree school choice; your interest in the coordinated dual-degree or specialized program may be addressed through the program-specific essay. (300-450 words)*Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school451 Words
Being a phlebotomist afraid of needles, I've heard the phrase "Be a man" more times than I've heard my Dad say, "I love you." And that's no coincidence. Society taught him—taught us—to be that way. Trapped in my ill-fitting lab coat, I've been mentored to be strong when I'm weak, tough when I'm in pain, cocky when I'm insecure. But that's not me. I'm a boy who lives with Sammy, an ikea polar bear and cuddle with him...Read more...School Specific Advice
How I chose schools to apply to110 WordsLook: I applied REA because Stanford was my dream school. Don't do that. REA'ing to Stanford, Harvard, MIT doesn't help you in any way except you'll know your decision as potentially a deferral....Read more...
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General Admissions Advice
What I wish I had known as a first generation applicant62 WordsApply questbridge. And scholarships. They'll be your lifeline through college. Instead of choosing the school that provided the best...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders106 WordsHelp them write the letters of recommendation. Yes, you'll be giving them a brag sheet. But, these teachers and professionals are just as human as you. They have their own lives to...Read more...My insights about AP (Advanced Placement) courses and exams152 WordsAs long as you keep your GPA as spiked as possible in comparison to your classmates, you're chilling. I was kind of a mid-student in high school. No IB classes, only one club, didn't study for AP tests. However, I made up for my extracurriculars outside...Read more...
High School Performance
College Classes In High SchoolWeighted GPA4.68(equivalent to 3.80 unweighted)RankTop 10%
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