musicpixie,
UMass
B.S., Animal Sciences, , Japanese Language and Literature
I absolutely love animals and live in a house with so many animals that many consider it a zoo.
Features Included
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Essays
4
Schools
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Scores
2
Advice
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ECs
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Sports

Background

Hometown West Boylston, Massachusetts
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
AdmissionEarly Action
Class of2016
English First Language No
Other Language(s) Spoken Japanese

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • University of Massachusetts - Amherst (Amherst, MA)
  • Clemson University (Clemson, SC)
  • Colorado State University  (Fort Collins, CO)
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University of Massachusetts - Amherst (Amherst, MA)

Applied for a B.S. in Animal Sciences

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

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Personal Statement
79 Words
Work experience
During the last three summers, I have worked as a Leader in Training (L.I.T.) and then as a counselor at a day camp located in West Boylston. Though my days were always filled with the surprises that come from working with five- and six-year-old children, one certain day will never leave my memory. A little girl was taking a drink from the bubbler. Then she took only a few steps before she started to cough and cry.
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Supplemental Essay Amusing anecdote
47 Words
Standing in front of a crowd isn't easy. It's even harder to entertain said crowd. But what's worse than that is the technology not working when you need it to. This is a time in my life when technology failed me when I needed it the most.
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Additional Essay Details
496 Words
Standing behind the curtain, I was ready to go. I was about to perform an upbeat Japanese pop song by an artist named Erina Mano at my high school’s multi-cultural festival. I had to wait for only a few more seconds before I heard the cue from the emcee to go onto the stage. Putting a big smile on my face, I walked out in front of the whole school of about three hundred students and teachers. I stood...
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General Admissions Advice

My extracurricular activities in college, and why I chose them
98 Words
As a person who was mostly pushed into working and having to take out a lot of loans, I naturally found work to do while at college. However, I...
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My advice about getting recommenders
91 Words
Recommendations are always very important. Even after getting into college, you are going to need someone to write you a recommendation letter. Although it is easier in...
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High School Performance

GPA
3.60
(no specification of weighting)
Rank
Top 25%
 
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Academic Performance in High School Steady
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SAT Prep

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details3 classes and scores

Sports

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