fernilion
fernilion,
USC ‘20
B.A., Architecture
Architecture student at the University of Southern California
Features Included
3
Essays
6
Schools
6
Scores
5
Advice
3
ECs
1
Sports

Background

Hometown Mason, Ohio
GenderMale
EthnicityHispanic
AdmissionRegular Decision
English First Language No
Other Language(s) Spoken Spanish

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • University of Southern California (Los Angeles, CA)
  • Washington University in St. Louis (St. Louis, MO)
  • Northeastern University (Boston, MA)
  • Pennsylvania State University - University Park (University Park, PA)
  • Ohio State University - Columbus (Columbus, Oh)
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University of Southern California (Los Angeles, CA)

Applied for a B.A. in Architecture

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
688 Words
International background, Story central to identity
7:20 on a Monday morning. I sat on my stool behind an untouched lump of clay, dumbfounded. A wave of anxiety washed over me as my eyes darted around the room. Everywhere I looked, fingers danced through clay forming intricate doors, roofs, and windows; but not mine. My fingers were stuck tracing the sentence over and over again. “Create a sculpture that represents your home.” I repeated it under my breath. “Home”— a word that I had called out thousands of...
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Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay
273 Words
I stand at only five foot six— which is probably why I’m obsessed with tall buildings. Having a body that doesn’t quite size up to my personality and aspirations, I’ve gone through life with my head tilted back; looking up for my spot among city skylines. Up there, I plan to leave my mark— a mark at a greater scale than just five feet and six inches. A mark that people can’t ignore. That’s the...
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Supplemental Essay Diversity statement
536 Words
I hate how ethnicity silences people. I hate how awkward of a topic it is, and how nervous everyone is to address it. I hate the looks and whispers it creates. I hate the invisible walls it puts up, and I don’t understand why. Why do we try to act like we are blind to color and race when they are the first traits we see? I am tan. Nestled in my thick eyebrows and dark hair are recipes...
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General Admissions Advice

Why I ultimately chose my school
67 Words
Not only is USC one of the top 10 architecture schools in the nation, but it is one of the only...
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My advice about getting recommenders
200 Words
It's smart to get close to teachers that are good at writing. I only had one teacher write my recommendation, but since she was my AP English Language and Composition teacher, I knew she would write a killer essay. I had her for two years, and she was my student government advisor as well. That way, she knew I...
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What I’d change about my application process
235 Words
I am very proud with how I handled the application process. I started in August, and filled out all the tedious common app information. As soon as the senior school year started, I asked teachers for my recs. Then, I wrote my personal statement for the common app. This essay took me a whole month because although I had the general idea of what I was writing, I had to...
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Recommended summer activities during high school and college
209 Words
Make sure you do one big college-application-worthy thing every summer. Yes, everyone wants to enjoy their time off, travel, and relax, but you have almost 3 whole months! Many of these activities are only a week, and they can greatly improve your chances of getting in because they show that you used your time off wisely. One activity that I recommend is...
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How I chose schools to apply to
160 Words
The very first thing I did was look at several ranking lists for undergraduate programs in my major. The architecture program was what was most important to me, so I really looked at schools in the top 10 or 20 in the nation. After that, I made a list of...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.5
 
Rank
Top 10%
 
High School TypePublic
Academic Performance in High School Steady

Test Scores

Highest ACT
33
 
ACT Score Details
 
Other ACT Scores
ACT Prep

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details5 classes and scores

Sports

SportsTrack & Field

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesStudent Council / Government, Multicultural / International Club, National Honor Society
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received

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