frenchlover11
frenchlover11,
Yale
B.A., Public Health
I am a passionate learner interested in French culture, community health interventions, and music.
Features Included
9
Essays
2
Schools
7
Scores
5
Advice
10
ECs
1
Sports

Background

Hometown Vacaville, California
GenderFemale
EthnicityBlack / African American
Class of2028
First Gen College StudentNo

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • Yale University (New Haven, CT)
  • University of Virginia (Charlottesville, VA)
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Yale University (New Haven, CT)

Applied for a B.A. in Public Health

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

Personal Statement
651 Words
Extracurricular passion
Decatur, Georgia is home to the Blues & Bluegrass festival, the Dekalb Black History Center, and at least thirty hyper-advertised fast-food joints. Whenever we visited my father’s predominately Black hometown, I noticed that the supermarkets with fresh produce couldn’t hold a candle to the number of fried chicken, seafood, and burger franchises that sprouted up on every street corner. Even as a child, I saw that my father’s eating habits—which included numerous rounds of caramel ice cream...
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Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
127 Words
Why Yale?
Taking public health courses at Yale Online hooked me on Yale's culture of critical thinking, showing me how economic prosperity did not always translate to nutritional health (American obesity an example). I'm eager to study under Ania Jastereboff, MD, at Yale's new obesity research center and deepen my work tackling obesity in black communities. At Yale Farm, I'm excited to build on my community garden work started at Arcadia farm. At the newly formed Generational African American Student Association, I...
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Supplemental Essay: Other
400 Words
Reflect on your membership in a community to which you feel connected. Why is this community meaningful to you? You may define community however you like.
Growing up in the military, I moved around and my blackness attracted many forms of rejection. For example, at playtime in the UK, an English classmate said my lip was “too brown,” for us to play together. But, upon arriving in the US, my black peers said I spoke "too white." Such comments from other black students cut the deepest, and none cut deeper than comments about my "unkempt" hair, either straightened or tucked away in a bun. For my...
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Supplemental Essay: Extracurricular activity
152 Words
Tell us about a topic or idea that excites you and is related to one or more academic areas you selected above. Why are you drawn to it?
I strive to give transcendent musical performances. I am fascinated with how strange vocal techniques have transformed my voice from faint and shaky to, as my teacher stated, “smooth as peanut butter.” In order to belt Heart Attack by Demi Lovato, I first needed to blow through pursed lips for lip trills and practice articulation with “Mommy made me mash my M&M’s.” While singing Ella Fitzgerald’s “My Funny Valentine” in my school’s Broadway Night, everything finally...
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Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school
28 Words
What inspires you?
The idea of revitalizing underserved areas; curing underprivileged communities from mental & physical generational traumas; expanding my scope of impact beyond my community in VA to global health
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Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school
22 Words
If you could teach any college course, write a book, or create an original piece of art of any kind, what would it be?
“The Power of Forgiveness with Your Adversaries.” Unit topics would include forgiving old flames, skeptics, family members, and most importantly, yourself.
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Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school
35 Words
Other than a family member, who is someone who has had a significant influence on you? What has been the impact of their influence?
My track & field coach has been a constant supporter in my life through the laughs, loving advice, & lactic acid soreness. He gave me a place to truly feel free (yet not feel my legs).
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Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school
33 Words
What is something about you that is not included anywhere else in your application?
I have a deep love for anime that has made me buy action figures, read manga, draw fan-art, and do daily exercise challenges to attain the unattainable physiques of my favorite characters.
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Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement
230 Words
What about your individual background, perspective, or experience will serve as a source of strength for you or those around you at UVA? Feel free to write about any past experience or part of your background that has shaped your perspective and will be a source of strength, including but not limited to those related to your community, upbringing, educational environment, race, gender, or other aspects of your background that are important to you.
brat, that paradox describes me perfectly. Despite being one of the only Black kids at my elementary school in Lakenheath, England, I was unbothered; race was not even a word in my vocabulary yet. It wasn’t until I attempted to play with some kids at recess that I felt different—rejected because, as one kid said, my upper lip was brown. In that instant, my world turned black and white. Upon moving to the U.S, I initially tried...
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School Specific Advice

How to balance class with social or extracurricular involvements
205 Words
Striking a balance between class and social or extracurricular involvements is very difficult, but doable. Originally, I prioritized class and extracurricular involvements at the top of my list. I felt as if by securing these, my resume, medical school application, and everything else would fall in place. While this was correct to some extent--as my resume is now more than secure-- deprioritizing...
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5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
433 Words
Daring: Students at Yale are not afraid to go after what they want and do it with a high level of determination and competitiveness(not necessarily out of a want to be better than someone else, but just to ensure that they get a position or reward). They advocate for themselves, search hard for internship and job opportunities, and will not take no for an answer(and if they do, they will find another way.) Community oriented: While I mentioned about that they can be competitive, it is more so ensuring that they have a seat at a table, and...
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General Admissions Advice

Recommended summer activities during high school and college
195 Words
In coming to Yale, I saw everyone around me looking to use maximize their time and access to opportunities--from doing internships and research during the school year, to going on week long volunteer excursions during winter and spring breaks, to taking on large projects and working for nonprofits in the summer. It was new to me, because while I...
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My advice about getting recommenders
192 Words
I would break down the process of obtaining a recommender into three key steps. The first and most foundational step(all others may not work without this one) is being an excellent student in the class. While having a good grade is the most practical way of checking off this box, demonstrating interest and a want to improve...
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Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received
290 Words
Due to some financial constraints, my mother and I had to be very careful with whether we used an admissions counselor and the extent of help we got. We first used free online resources and YouTube as much as possible for general mentoring, then bought a few days worth of health from a group of college application specialists, a writing tutor, and then an SAT tutor. However, these were only used once a significant amount of studying and writing were done to minimize costs and boost the...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.43
(equivalent to 4.00 unweighted)
Rank
Top 5%
 
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady

Test Scores

Highest SAT
1440
 
SAT Score Details
 
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details6 classes and scores

Sports

SportsTrack & Field

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesAmerican Red Cross, Environmental, Music: Vocal, Music: Instrumental, Hospital Volunteer, National Honor Society, Foreign Language, Research, School Choir, Nonprofit, NGO or Charitable Organization
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Experience & Awards

Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received

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