minharleen
minharleen,
UC Berkeley
B.A., Public Health
I am a first-generation college student, aspiring healthcare professional, and community advocate passionate about service, leadership, and using my experiences to help others.
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Schools
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Advice
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ECs
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Sports

Background

Hometown Los Angeles, California
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2030
First Gen College StudentYes

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)
  • Grand Canyon University (Phoenix, AZ)
  • University of California - Irvine (Irvine, CA)
  • University of California - Riverside (Riverside, CA)
  • California State University - Fullerton (Fullerton, CA)
  • California State University - Northridge (Los Angeles, CA)
  • California State University - Long Beach (Long Beach, CA)
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University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)

Applied for a B.A. in Public Health

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?
The hardest part of growing up was never knowing which version of home I would wake up to every day. Some days, it was arguments that echoed as the cold morning breeze came; other days, it was tension so thick that even silence felt loud. I learned to stay in bed longer during vacations to stay out of the way, and to get up early in the mornings for school before anything else. My mental health began to slip away...
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Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes or contributed to group efforts over time.
"You will only fail as a leader when you think that today is going to be easier than yesterday." This quote from "The Wisdom of the Bullfrog" by Admiral William H. McRaven has guided how I lead my community through my non-profit organization, Nurses of the Future. What began as a school club later transformed into a non-profit organization after I moved to the city of Palmdale in Southern California, where I continued its mission to support students interested in...
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Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.
Creativity is letting your imagination flow through you, whether it is with your paintbrush and canvas or your stylus and screen. Art has always been my escape, a way to relieve stress from school and life by entering a world that only I can control. What began as drawings of houses with triangle rooftops slowly evolved into detailed drawings. But as I grew older, it became harder to find time for this hobby, so I came to love digital art,...
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Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?
"Do well in school, I need all A's in your classes." That was all I ever heard from my father growing up. I wish it were encouragement rather than feeling like a requirement. Ever since, succeeding has felt tattooed on me, like a permanent mark I could not erase. I have had familial pressure to make them proud since I was a child, which deeply affected my mental health. It became part of my everyday life when my family had...
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Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom.
The bright green door began to glow. As I touched the door, everything felt new, exciting, and fresh. Inside was a classroom with white walls and ten tables with sinks. This was the first day I walked into my Sports Medicine class at Palmdale High School in Southern California, during my junior year of high school in 2024. I introduced myself to the instructor, Mrs. Wright, an athletic trainer, who warmly welcomed me and placed me with a group of girls...
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Supplemental Essay: Other
252 Words
Please describe the challenges or circumstances and how they have impacted you.
Growing up in a household with parents who work long, demanding shifts taught me responsibility. While my parents worked three to four shifts, I cared for my little brother and managed my academics. Rest often felt like a luxury while managing my nonprofit organization, Nurses of the Future, volunteering, and extracurriculars. This pushed me to mature quickly and taught me adaptability and empathy.  An additional challenge was that during my freshman and sophomore years of high school, I struggled with...
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School Specific Advice

Why I declined other schools
148 Words
Although I was grateful to be accepted to multiple universities, I ultimately chose UC Berkeley because it offered the best combination of academics, opportunities, and affordability for my goals. When making my decision, I looked beyond rankings and considered factors such as financial aid,...
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How I chose schools to apply to
159 Words
I started by thinking about my long-term career goals instead of applying to schools based only on rankings or prestige. Since I knew I wanted to pursue a career in healthcare, I researched colleges with strong science programs, research opportunities, hospitals nearby, student organizations related to healthcare,...
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Why I ultimately chose my school
181 Words
I ultimately chose UC Berkeley because it aligned with my academic goals, career aspirations, and personal values. As someone interested in healthcare, I wanted a university that offered strong academics, opportunities for research and hands-on learning, and a community where I could continue growing as a student and future healthcare professional. Beyond academics,...
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General Admissions Advice

How to deal with the stress of applying to college
119 Words
Applying to college can feel overwhelming, especially when you're balancing classes, extracurriculars, work, and family responsibilities. Don't try to do everything on your own. Reach out to your counselors, teachers, and other school staff whenever...
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Recommended summer activities during high school and college
115 Words
Summer is one of the best opportunities to explore your interests without the pressure of a full school schedule. Instead of trying to do as many activities as possible, focus on experiences that genuinely...
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What I’d change about my application process
116 Words
If I could do the application process again, I would start much earlier. Use the summer before senior year to brainstorm essay ideas, write rough drafts, and research colleges and scholarships. Once school begins, your...
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My advice about getting recommenders
160 Words
Ask for recommendation letters early ideally at the beginning of your senior year or even before if your school allows it. Teachers are often writing dozens of letters at the same time, so giving them plenty of notice allows them to write a more thoughtful and detailed...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.87
(equivalent to 3.90 unweighted)
Rank
Top 1%
 
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady

Test Scores

Highest SAT
1180
 
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Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details2 classes and scores

Sports

SportsTennis

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesYearbook, American Red Cross, Hospital Volunteer, Nonprofit, NGO or Charitable Organization
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Experience & Awards

Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received

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