minharleen,
UC Berkeley
B.A., Public Health
I am a first-generation college student, aspiring healthcare professional, and community advocate passionate about service, leadership, and using my experiences to help others.
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Los Angeles, California
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
Class of2030
First Gen College StudentYes
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Tap/click a school logo above to view essays and advice specific to that school.University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)
Applied for a B.A. in Public Health
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
The lessons we take from obstacles we encounter can be fundamental to later success. Recount a time when you faced a challenge, setback, or failure. How did it affect you, and what did you learn from the experience?Personal Statement669 WordsCareer aspirations, Development of personal values, Family background, Overcoming personal struggle, Story central to identity, Volunteer/public interest workThe hardest part of growing up was never knowing which version of home I would wake up to every day. Some days, it was arguments that echoed as the cold morning breeze came; other days, it was tension so thick that even silence felt loud. I learned to stay in bed longer during vacations to stay out of the way, and to get up early in the mornings for school before anything else. My mental health began to slip away...Read more...Describe an example of your leadership experience in which you have positively influenced others, helped resolve disputes or contributed to group efforts over time.Personal Statement349 WordsCareer aspirations, Development of personal values, Extracurricular passion, Leadership experience, Reaching a goal, Volunteer/public interest work"You will only fail as a leader when you think that today is going to be easier than yesterday." This quote from "The Wisdom of the Bullfrog" by Admiral William H. McRaven has guided how I lead my community through my non-profit organization, Nurses of the Future. What began as a school club later transformed into a non-profit organization after I moved to the city of Palmdale in Southern California, where I continued its mission to support students interested in...Read more...Every person has a creative side, and it can be expressed in many ways: problem solving, original and innovative thinking, and artistically, to name a few. Describe how you express your creative side.Personal Statement353 WordsArt/acting/singing, Creative personal story, Development of personal values, Extracurricular passion, Interest in fine arts, Leadership experienceCreativity is letting your imagination flow through you, whether it is with your paintbrush and canvas or your stylus and screen. Art has always been my escape, a way to relieve stress from school and life by entering a world that only I can control. What began as drawings of houses with triangle rooftops slowly evolved into detailed drawings. But as I grew older, it became harder to find time for this hobby, so I came to love digital art,...Read more...Describe the most significant challenge you have faced and the steps you have taken to overcome this challenge. How has this challenge affected your academic achievement?Personal Statement352 WordsDevelopment of personal values, Family background, First in family to college, Overcoming depression, Overcoming personal struggle, Story central to identity"Do well in school, I need all A's in your classes." That was all I ever heard from my father growing up. I wish it were encouragement rather than feeling like a requirement. Ever since, succeeding has felt tattooed on me, like a permanent mark I could not erase. I have had familial pressure to make them proud since I was a child, which deeply affected my mental health. It became part of my everyday life when my family had...Read more...Think about an academic subject that inspires you. Describe how you have furthered this interest inside and/or outside of the classroom.Personal Statement357 WordsCareer aspirations, Development of personal values, Extracurricular passion, Interest in med/sci/math, One moment that changed you, Role model/inspirationThe bright green door began to glow. As I touched the door, everything felt new, exciting, and fresh. Inside was a classroom with white walls and ten tables with sinks. This was the first day I walked into my Sports Medicine class at Palmdale High School in Southern California, during my junior year of high school in 2024. I introduced myself to the instructor, Mrs. Wright, an athletic trainer, who warmly welcomed me and placed me with a group of girls...Read more...Please describe the challenges or circumstances and how they have impacted you.Supplemental Essay: Other252 WordsGrowing up in a household with parents who work long, demanding shifts taught me responsibility. While my parents worked three to four shifts, I cared for my little brother and managed my academics. Rest often felt like a luxury while managing my nonprofit organization, Nurses of the Future, volunteering, and extracurriculars. This pushed me to mature quickly and taught me adaptability and empathy. An additional challenge was that during my freshman and sophomore years of high school, I struggled with...Read more...School Specific Advice
Why I declined other schools148 WordsAlthough I was grateful to be accepted to multiple universities, I ultimately chose UC Berkeley because it offered the best combination of academics, opportunities, and affordability for my goals. When making my decision, I looked beyond rankings and considered factors such as financial aid,...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to159 WordsI started by thinking about my long-term career goals instead of applying to schools based only on rankings or prestige. Since I knew I wanted to pursue a career in healthcare, I researched colleges with strong science programs, research opportunities, hospitals nearby, student organizations related to healthcare,...Read more...Why I ultimately chose my school181 WordsI ultimately chose UC Berkeley because it aligned with my academic goals, career aspirations, and personal values. As someone interested in healthcare, I wanted a university that offered strong academics, opportunities for research and hands-on learning, and a community where I could continue growing as a student and future healthcare professional. Beyond academics,...Read more...
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General Admissions Advice
How to deal with the stress of applying to college119 WordsApplying to college can feel overwhelming, especially when you're balancing classes, extracurriculars, work, and family responsibilities. Don't try to do everything on your own. Reach out to your counselors, teachers, and other school staff whenever...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college115 WordsSummer is one of the best opportunities to explore your interests without the pressure of a full school schedule. Instead of trying to do as many activities as possible, focus on experiences that genuinely...Read more...What I’d change about my application process116 WordsIf I could do the application process again, I would start much earlier. Use the summer before senior year to brainstorm essay ideas, write rough drafts, and research colleges and scholarships. Once school begins, your...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders160 WordsAsk for recommendation letters early ideally at the beginning of your senior year or even before if your school allows it. Teachers are often writing dozens of letters at the same time, so giving them plenty of notice allows them to write a more thoughtful and detailed...Read more...
High School Performance
College Classes In High SchoolWeighted GPA4.87(equivalent to 3.90 unweighted)RankTop 1%
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Test Scores
Highest SAT1180SAT Score DetailsOther SAT ScoresSAT Prep
AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details2 classes and scores
Sports
SportsTennis
Extracurriculars
ActivitiesYearbook, American Red Cross, Hospital Volunteer, Nonprofit, NGO or Charitable Organization
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