johnmorales12
johnmorales12,
CSULB ‘17
B.A., Sociology
Transfer student at Cal State Long Beach, GO BEACH! Look at my profile too!
Features Included
2
Essays
5
Schools
0
Scores
5
Advice
3
ECs
1
Sports

Background

Hometown ventura, California
GenderMale
EthnicityHispanic
AdmissionEarly Decision, Early Action
English First Language Yes

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • California State University - Long Beach (Long Beach, CA)
  • California State University - Northridge (Los Angeles, CA)
  • San Diego State University (San Diego, CA)
  • University of California - Los Angeles (Los Angeles, CA)
  • University of California - Santa Barbara (Santa Barbara, CA)
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California State University - Long Beach (Long Beach, CA)

Applied for a B.A. in Sociology

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: Other Relative

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
409 Words
Diversity statement, Overcoming a health obstacle
In 2006, I was diagnosed with having an AVM, arteriovenous malformation. This is caused by abnormal connection between arteries and veins that was in a cluster the size of a hacky sack on the right side of my brain. I was at a point where I could not do anything physical, like: wrestle, play football, or anything else that required an excessive movement or potential harm towards my head. AVMs affect less than 1% of the population, and it happened to me....
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Additional Essay Details
590 Words
One Saturday morning, I was making my way down to City Kidz. As I made my way, picking kids up from the neighborhood as I go, I was halted by the sound of helicopters flying over the block. I became concerned when I was confronted with five police cars upon arrival of a City Kidz member's home. I soon found out that the ten-to-eleven year old next door had stabbed his twenty year old brother. With my work at City...
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General Admissions Advice

How to approach transferring schools
94 Words
Go to CC, life would be so much easier, get your good grades you wanted at a CC you couldn't get in high school. Talk to a transfer...
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My favorite course thus far, and why
36 Words
My favorite course thus far was my social psychology course that...
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My extracurricular activities in college, and why I chose them
40 Words
My extracurricular activity in college was that I was an assistant high...
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Recommended summer activities during high school and college
47 Words
What I would recommend during summer is to take at least one summer school...
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Why I declined other schools
88 Words
I was accepted to a few schools out of my CC. I was accepted to Long Beach State and a couple other CSUs, I also was...
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High School Performance

GPA
2.9
(no specification of weighting)
Rank
Top 50%
 
High School TypePublic
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades

Test Scores

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Sports

SportsWrestling

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesAfter School Sports Coach, Key Club, Rotary Club
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received

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