College Admissions Info

Pace University, ‘19
BBA, Business Management

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • Test Scores
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 2 supplemental essays
  • 7 advice topics

Student Background

I was born and raised in southern California. I have experience with the UC and Cal state applications. I ended up going to a school in New York. I got accepted into every school I applied to.
From: Long Beach , California
Gender: Female
Race/Ethnicity: White Non-Hispanic
Legacy: Parent
Admission: Regular Decision, Early Action
Applied To: 5 schools
Accepted At: Pace, Hofstra, SDSU, UHawaii, NAU
Denied At:
Waitlisted At:
Withdrew From:
Is English First Language: Yes

Test Scores

Converted SAT Score: 1280
Highest SAT: 1790
Highest ACT:
ACT Prep:
PSAT Scores:

High School Performance

GPA, Weighted
Top 10%
High School Type: Other Private
AP / IB Classes and Scores:
College Classes In High School:
Academic Performance in High School: Steady
Explanation of Any Low Grades:

Extracurriculars & Awards

Sports: Soccer
Extracurricular Activities: National Honor Society, Spanish Club, Community Cleanup / Service
Volunteer Experiences:
Awards Received:

College Application Essays

Who are you? This question tends to be perceived as something simple that can be answered with a name, a birthday, and some physical features. However, this question holds so much more depth than most care to admit. People are defined by so much more than anything that can be written in a few sentences. This truth didn’t strike me as reality until I read the novel The Perks of Being a Wallflower by Stephen Chbosky. It was the...

Supplemental Essay: Scholarship application
120 Words
I want to be more. I want to be more than a simple number label. I want to be more than a name and a birth date. I want to be more than what is seen at first glance or just a microscopic percentage of the population. To be someone that is more than all of these things and leaves a legacy is one of the most important goals for my life. As Oscar Wilde once said, “To live is...

Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
75 Words
The mission statement, “to provide a quality education to its students in an environment that encourages, nurtures, and supports learning through the free and open exchange of ideas, for the betterment of humankind,” had a major impact on making this my first choice school. An environment filled with free thinkers makes learning more effective. I would fit in well because I strive to foster freethinking and openness in my life and the lives of others.

College Admissions Advice

What I now know about my school that I never would have known prior to enrolling
38 Words
Everything about Pace Universit revolves around the student. They will do...

What I’d change about my application process
57 Words
Apply to a lot of schools. Colleges are getting more and more competitive each year. I had...

What set me apart from other applicants
58 Words
Colleges want to know what makes you unique. I enrolled at a junior college close to my...

Why I ultimately chose my school
59 Words
I love New York City and everything about it. I loved how my school was right in the...

Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice
32 Words
I recieved almost a full tuition scholarship from my school....

How I chose schools to apply to
45 Words
I applied to schools all over the place. I applied to schools in Hawaii,...

What I like about my school’s location and culture
47 Words
My schools is right in the heart of the financial district. Going to school...