cindy_dartmout,
Dartmouth
B.A., Economics, , Romance Languages and Literatures, , Engineering Design
Dartmouth Class of 2018
Features Included
5
Essays
18
Schools
18
Scores
7
Advice
8
ECs
0
Sports

Background

Hometown Los Angeles, California
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian
AdmissionRegular Decision
Class of2018
English First Language Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken Spanish, Portuguese, Mandarin

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • Dartmouth College (Hanover, NH)
  • Stanford University (Stanford, CA)
  • Massachusetts Institute of Technology (Cambridge, MA)
  • Columbia University (New York, NY)
  • University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
  • Princeton University (Princeton, NJ)
  • Yale University (New Haven, CT)
  • University of Chicago (Chicago, IL)
  • Brown University (Providence, RI)
  • Washington University in St. Louis (St. Louis, MO)
  • University of California - San Diego (La Jolla, CA)
  • University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)
  • University of California - Santa Barbara (Santa Barbara, CA)
  • Northeastern University (Boston, MA)
  • Northwestern University (Evanston, IL)
  • Carnegie Mellon University (Pittsburgh, PA)
  • Duke University (Durham, NC)
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Dartmouth College (Hanover, NH)

Applied for a B.A. in Economics

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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I had always considered myself decent at breathing. But my sudden near-hyperventilation, along with a doubled heart rate and flailing limbs, suggested otherwise. I clicked “refresh” to make sure it wasn’t a mistake. Ten more times. Shop Me—a non-profit, online retail clothing store I had started just two months prior—had made its first international sale. The idea for Shop Me had come to me at the end of my sophomore summer as I sat, bawling my eyes...
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Supplemental Essay Amusing anecdote
421 Words
When I was nine years old, I was convinced that I’d make a fortune if I became Uncle Laoshu’s betta fish breeder. Seeing how well they sold in his pet shop, I hoped to produce enough betta babies to fill the fish shelf. Although Laoshu warned me that betta fish, also known as Siamese fighting fish, would kill each other if two were ever placed in the same tank, I believed this was a multi-dollar fish empire in...
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Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school
63 Words
Yearbook is my favorite part of the school day. My life would be incomplete without designing until 4 PM, delegating tasks to section editors, and ordering Thai food for the Yearbook Gang - my 22-person family. Becoming the youngest-ever editor-in-chief wasn’t easy - it put me in charge of older kids whom I admired. [see HS Extracurricular to read rest of essay]
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Supplemental Essay Strong beliefs/principles
258 Words
As a longtime connoisseur of yogurt—and of Greek yogurt in particular—I consider myself an educated yogurt consumer. And any educated Greek yogurt consumer in the United States knows that there is one brand that tastes exponentially better than the rest: Fage Total Greek Yogurt. In fact, it’s the number one seller in Greece itself! But I’d venture to say that the vast majority of yogurt consumers have, at least once, made the following tragic but understandable...
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Additional Essay Details
667 Words
When I was nine years old, I was convinced that I’d make a fortune if I became Uncle Laoshu’s betta fish breeder. Seeing how well they sold in his pet shop, I hoped to produce enough betta babies to fill the fish shelf. Although Laoshu warned me that betta fish, also known as Siamese fighting fish, would kill each other if two were ever placed in the same tank, I believed this was a multi-dollar fish empire in...
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General Admissions Advice

Most popular extracurricular activities at my college
11 Words
Newspaper/Journalism, Sports ...
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My favorite course thus far, and why
86 Words
The benefits of attending a liberal arts college include the ability to take interdisciplinary classes that help you explore topics that have never been introduced to...
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5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
5 Words
involved, extroverted,...
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What I’d change about my school if I were student body president
9 Words
More social activities...
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What I now know about my school that I never would have known prior to enrolling
10 Words
The extent to...
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Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received
110 Words
Used 2 private counselors - the first one, called Ivy Coach, is awful. They are very close-minded and have a strict idea of how you should write your essay (or how they should write...
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List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience
30 Words
WUSTL Dartmouth Duke UPenn Princeton MIT...
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High School Performance

GPA
3.95
(no specification of weighting)
Rank
Top 10%
 
High School TypePublic
Academic Performance in High School Steady

Test Scores

Highest ACT
34
 
ACT Score Details
 
ACT Prep
SAT Prep
SAT IIs
PSAT Scores

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details12 classes and scores

Sports

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesAsian Club / Asian Interactive Youth Association, Admissions or Post-Acceptance Committee, Key Club, Library Volunteer, School Band, Nonprofit, NGO or Charitable Organization, Tutoring/Mentoring, Yearbook
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work

Experience & Awards

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