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CMU
B.S., Psychology, , Economics
My life comprises of sports, TV shows, and good pizza.
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4
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Background
Hometown
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
GenderMale
EthnicityAsian
AdmissionRegular Decision
Class of2019
English First Language
Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken
Mandarin, Hindi
Results, Essays, and Advice
Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
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Carnegie Mellon University (Pittsburgh, PA)
Applied for a B.S. in Psychology
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“Don’t ever complain about your food again; you are dishonoring God’s creation,” my mom authoritatively states, refuting any objection I make towards a meal she has prepared. “Don’t forget to eat a spoonful of sugar before you leave for the airport so that God protects you through your journey.” If my mom is accompanying me on the airplane, and God forbid that we encounter turbulence, I can always expect to hear her chanting the Hindu mantra, “Om...Read more...Supplemental Essay Issue of personal significance404 WordsOn December 16th, 2012, Jyoti Pandey was brutally beaten and gang raped to death. It was an act of unprovoked violence, and one based fundamentally upon an misogynistic outlook that subordinates and objectifies women. There were 24,923 reported rape cases in India that year, although the true statistic is likely alarmingly greater due to the stigma women face in reporting such incidents. Jyoti’s story instigated unparalleled international discussion regarding the widespread maltreatment of women in India, compelling the Indian government to...Read more...Supplemental Essay Amusing anecdote397 WordsAs Class President, every day is an opportunity. It is an opportunity to further a meaningful cause, serve as a channel of communication between my peers and the administration and develop an environment conducive to communal growth. Among responsibilities ranging from organizing school activities to advising my classmates on school initiatives, my pride and glory throughout my three-year term as Class President undoubtedly lies in my success in unifying the class. Upon being elected sophomore Class President, I was confronted...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay307 WordsI naturally gravitate towards an outgoing and spirited environment, and thus find myself drawn towards Northwestern’s electrifying campus. Northwestern’s ability to link unprecedented school spirit to its mission of fostering teamwork within and beyond the classroom is remarkable. Northwestern unquestionably yields independent thinkers, but beyond that, its emphasis on a collaborative atmosphere centered on community development aligns with my goals of making a positive impact on my surroundings. As a prospective Psychology major, I am enticed by student-led...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay723 WordsI am not supposed to be here. I am supposed to be in the Indian city of Ajmer. I am supposed to be the son of a vegetable salesman. I am supposed to have limited aspirations in life. But, I am here. Once my dad graduated from college, he was eager to leave Ajmer, as he felt restricted by the meager opportunities available. However, given his family's dire financial condition, his longing was essentially an unattainable fantasy. Then, in May...Read more...General Admissions Advice
Why I ultimately chose my school48 WordsCMU's hands on mentality and hard working environment is primarily what attracted me to...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders29 WordsNot only should your recommender be a teacher from...Read more...Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred18 WordsMake sure to send a...Read more...What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school15 WordsMake sure the essay very...Read more...How to increase chances at my school32 WordsThere is really no way to determine your chances at...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.22RankTop 25%
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SportsBasketball, Softball, Volleyball
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