LLewis19
LLewis19,
BU
B.A., Foreign Language Teacher Education, , History Teacher Education, , High School Education
Hello world! My name is Lilly, and I would like to share my common application essay with you! I was accepted to Boston University, and I will be attending January 2016! Best of luck to all of you. I hope my essay can help you out with that writers block!
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Essays
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Schools
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Scores
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Advice
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ECs
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Sports

Background

Hometown Laredo , Texas
GenderFemale
EthnicityHispanic
AdmissionRegular Decision
Class of2019
English First Language No
Other Language(s) Spoken Spanish

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • Boston University (Boston, MA)
  • Boston College (Chestnut Hill, MA)
  • Northeastern University (Boston, MA)
  • Georgetown University (Washington, DC)
  • Drexel University (Philadelphia, PA)
  • Harvard University (Cambridge, MA)
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Boston University (Boston, MA)

Applied for a B.A. in Foreign Language Teacher Education

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
188 Words
Creative personal story, Story central to identity
I've always dreamed of pursuing History as a college career. To me, history is the guide to the future of society, because a society learns from past mistakes. Every nation, every state, every individual has their own history. My history began on the breezy town of Oceanside, California, my cherished birthplace. My time there was short-lived and after six months, I would move to my current hometown, Laredo, Texas. I was deeply fond of Laredo for giving me my Mexican...
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Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay
260 Words
From its iconic Warren Towers overlooking the Charles River to its collegiate gothic towers of the STH and CAS buildings, BU is my ideal place to learn, live, and grow, especially for a history major. I have always imagined myself time-traveling back to 1876 and meeting BU's former professor, Alexander Graham Bell, as I lay on BU Beach studying for my HI 152 final. I'd ask him how he feels about leaving his legacies in the hands of future BU students. Upon...
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Additional Essay Details
152 Words
Please note to self: Anyone can write an essay. You have to ask yourself how can YOU stand out from the thousands of other applicants? Make your essay as personal as you wish and always write with your heart in your hand. Do not be afraid to be creative with your literary elements. Do not give your whole life story away to the admission committee because they will most probably label you as boring and not creative. Your job is...
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General Admissions Advice

What set me apart from other applicants
20 Words
Anyone can write an essay. It...
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Recommended summer activities during high school and college
36 Words
Admission committees oftentimes like to see how involved you are in...
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Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice
59 Words
I took out federal loans in addition to having received a scholarship. My advice to you is that...
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Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred
106 Words
I was deferred from Boston University because of x reason. I was distraught, yet I did not let it get the best of me. So, I went back to my drawing board...
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What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school
35 Words
Do your research on your university and do not be afraid...
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How to increase chances at my school
9 Words
Talk to your...
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High School Performance

GPA
3.94
(no specification of weighting)
Rank
Top 10%
 
High School TypePublic
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades

Test Scores

Highest ACT
22
 
ACT Score Details
 
Other ACT Scores
ACT Prep
Highest SAT
1570
 
SAT Score Details
 
Converted SAT Score1140
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep
SAT IIs
PSAT Scores

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details5 classes and scores

Sports

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesChoir, Model Congress / Model UN, National Honor Society, Community Cleanup / Service
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received
Application Additional Materials

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