How I want to contribute to society through what I find personally interesting (healthcare) in a way that is community-oriented. I shared that am concerned about solving the issues our current systems face, and that with my variety of interests I aspire to develop creative ways to solve these issues.

Mentioned specific programs to show genuine interest in the school and how I was a good fit.

I am very earnest about what I'm interested in, and I think that showed through my writing.

Make a personal statement that makes you stand out with the sheer amount of passion you have for whatever you're doing. I generally...