2020Vision,
UPenn
B.A., Information Technology
I'm your average bubble tea fanatic that somehow got into Penn...
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16
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16
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Background
Hometown
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
GenderMale
EthnicityAsian
AdmissionEarly Decision
Class of2020
English First Language
No
Other Language(s) Spoken
English, Mandarin, Vietnamese
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University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
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Personal Statement652 WordsEmbracing your heritage, Family background, First in family to college, Interest in tech/engineering, Leaving home, One moment that changed you, Study/travel abroad, Summer experience, Feeling out of place, Failure experience, Embarrassing mistake, Ethical dilemmaIt was spring break of my junior year and I was waiting for a decision from the U.S. Department of State's National Security Language Initiative for Youth (NSLI-Y) study abroad scholarship. My phone vibrated once. Glancing at the screen, I read the email that held my fate. As soon as I saw "Congratulations," I knew that these last few grueling months of the application process and anticipation were finally worth it. I had won a full scholarship to live...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay462 Words(Why Babson?) Self-starter. Service-oriented. Independent thinker. Innovator. GameChanger. These are all adjectives I would use to define myself. As I got on stage to give a TED-style talk (as part of the 2015 XXXXXX conference) about how technology has redefined community service and service learning at my high school, I began to realize how much service has impacted my life. Ever since I was young, I have always been eager to help others whether it be holding the door or just...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay494 Words(Why Penn?) I looked down at the shiny red and blue hologram-covered plastic card in my hand – "Visiting Student" it read. It was the summer after my sophomore year, and I was invited to take part in an inaugural summer program through XXXX XXXX. The program was titled the XXX XXX XXX and was to be held in conjunction with the XXX XX XXX XXX XXX XXX on Penn's campus. Living in Southwest Philadelphia, I had inevitably found myself on...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay503 Words(Penn Huntsman) Recently, President Obama signed an agreement with Chinese President Xi to curb China's industrial espionage attacks on U.S. entities. Not only are these attacks potentially harming U.S. business interests at home and abroad, but they could symbolize deteriorating bilateral relations. However, the heart of the problem lies deep below the surface. Many of today's leaders in politics and business were born in 1970 or earlier, in the midst of the Red Scare. China became a communist nation...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay95 Words(Tufts) My interest in Tufts peaked when I met admissions counselor, XXX XXX, at the Westtown School College Fair. My enthusiasm increased due to Tufts' renowned academic reputation, proximity to Boston, abundant study-abroad programs, and diverse opportunities in my intended majors of Computer Science and Chinese. I am excited to enroll in Tufts' Cloud Computing courses as well as continuing my study of Mandarin Chinese, supplemented with studying abroad in China. Being close to Boston would also allow me to...Read more...Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school246 Words(Community Service Prompt) I walked into the high ceilinged auditorium of the Soviet-architecture headquarters of The School District of Philadelphia during the spring of my junior year. I was presenting my "XXXXXXXX" film to the School District's board of directors, commonly referred to as the School Reform Commission (SRC). When I started the project a year before, I never imagined I would be able to present my film at a SRC meeting. My original intention was to create an 8-minute...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay260 Words(Why Wooster?) My interest in The College of Wooster first began when I met current Wooster freshman, XXXX XXXXX, over the summer when we both studied abroad in Hangzhou, China for six weeks. I began to research Wooster's unique Independent Study program, the recognized Computer Science department, and the acclaimed Chinese department, all of which appeal to my interests. Having already completed high school independent study projects in computer science, I feel ready for Wooster's Independent Study project and envision...Read more...Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay193 Words(Why Lafayette?) The renowned academic reputation, opportunity to earn a dual degree in Engineering and International Studies, and the myriad of study-abroad opportunities attracts me to Lafayette. At Lafayette, I would like to pursue a double major in Electrical and Computer Engineering and International Studies with a foreign language concentration in Mandarin Chinese. I got my first computer when I was five years old, and as they say, the rest is history. Growing up, I had always been intrigued by...Read more...Supplemental Essay Unique question posed by school329 Words(Instance of Failure) The weather got colder outside and before I knew it, it was the second trimester of 8th grade. At this point, I knew I couldn’t run away from my fears. At my school, we have an infamous aquatics requirement of fourteen laps. Using four different strokes, one must complete the laps within 10 minutes, and the requirement must be fulfilled before graduation. And I, as somebody who had never been in a swimming pool before, was terrified. ...Read more...Supplemental Essay Issue of personal significance386 Words(My career goals) Throughout my childhood, people frequently asked me, “What do you want to be when you grow up?” At the age of 5, the common answer I gave was, “I want to be a superhero.” After years of watching Spiderman, The Incredibles, and Power Rangers, it seemed that saving the world from incoming meteors or the menacing Doctor Octopus was the most respectable and glorious occupation a child could aspire for. By the time I turned 10, I wanted to...Read more...Additional Essay Details95 WordsI always tried to visit a school before writing the Why Us? essay. Being able to picture myself on campus and what my routine would look like really helped me formulate an idea for each of my Why Us? essays. I went through many drafts and relied on my counselor, friends and the writing center at my school to help me. I also recycled many of the essays I wrote, tweaking them slightly from each school. Over the course of...Read more...General Admissions Advice
What might make for a good “Why Us” essay topic at my school53 WordsFor Penn, move beyond the cliches of Benjamin Franklin and living in Philly. I used specific...Read more...What I’d change about my application process63 WordsI would have tried to get my essays done earlier. Senior year fall was a hectic time because of...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received40 WordsI did not use a private counselor. I relied on the Internet...Read more...Why I declined other schools45 WordsI declined other schools because I applied Early Decision to Penn and was accepted....Read more...What set me apart from other applicants51 WordsI come from an underrepresented background (Vietnamese) within an overrepresented race (Asian) on college campuses....Read more...List of schools I interviewed with and my interview experience44 WordsI interviewed with many schools but my favorite interview experience was Penn. My...Read more...Recommended summer activities during high school and college49 WordsI would not recommend doing expensive summer programs to boost your college apps. I would...Read more...Why I ultimately chose my school36 WordsPenn was my dream school for as long as I can...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice30 WordsPenn has a no loans policy so I did...Read more...Reaching out to professors and coaches at schools I applied to19 WordsI did not do any reaching...Read more...Post-college plans33 WordsI hope to get a job combining my interests of...Read more...How to increase chances at my school17 WordsApply ED. Penn loves kids...Read more...My advice about getting recommenders70 WordsAsk teachers that have known you the best/longest. I asked my Physics teacher who has known me since 6th grade...Read more...What I like about my school’s location and culture53 WordsGrowing up as a city boy, I knew I wanted to try and stay in a...Read more...Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred35 WordsI was not wait-listed or deferred but in the event you...Read more...How I chose schools to apply to18 WordsI looked for schools in...Read more...High School Performance
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