My personal statement was about my final year of volunteering as a Girl Scout Day Camp aide. While I had 5 years of experience, the other aide Zo was new to camp. I tried my best to catch her up to my level, but it didn't work. The climax of my essay is when all the kids in my group were huddled around me, trying to hold my hand, hug me, etc. and Zo is all alone. I ask the kids...