jordan31797
jordan31797,
UPenn ‘17
B.S., Bioengineering and Biomedical Engineering
I love science and playing sports!
Features Included
3
Essays
8
Schools
16
Scores
0
Advice
2
ECs
3
Sports

Background

Hometown Honeoye Falls, New York
GenderFemale
EthnicityWhite Non-Hispanic
AdmissionRegular Decision
English First Language Yes

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
  • Brown University (Providence, RI)
  • Yale University (New Haven, CT)
  • Harvard University (Cambridge, MA)
  • University of Delaware (Newark, DE)
  • University of Pittsburgh (Pittsburgh, PA)
  • Binghamton University - SUNY (Binghamton, NY)
  • Rensselaer Polytechnic Institute (Troy, NY)
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University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)

Applied for a B.S. in Bioengineering and Biomedical Engineering

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
118 Words
Role model/inspiration
My personal essay was about my experiences as a swimmer in high school. It detailed what I learned from the captain of the team when I was a new member of the team. It then incorporated how I was a captain now and was using the things I had learned. It was about my growth as a person, what qualities I admired in others and what my morals were. I used the premise of athletics to really talk about what...
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Supplemental Essay Amusing anecdote
26 Words
Quote by Ben Franklin along the lines of "some people are moved, some are immovable and some move." Essay prompt asked which are you and why.
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Additional Essay Details
119 Words
I thought the common response would be to say "I move" so my essay says that I embody all three parts of the quote. I said that I am not closed minded and like to learn new things and can be moved. I also have some principles that I never deviate from and therefore I am immovable. I also am a leader and therefore I move people. This premise gave me an opportunity to explain many parts of my personality...
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General Admissions Advice

High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.4
 
Rank
Top 1%
 
High School TypePublic
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades

Test Scores

Highest ACT
35
 
ACT Score Details
 
ACT Prep
Highest SAT
2250
 
SAT Score Details
 
Converted SAT Score1540
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep
SAT IIs
PSAT Scores
Other Standardized Tests

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details8 classes and scores

Sports

SportsLacrosse (Recruited), Swimming/Diving, Skiing

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesBig Brother/Big Sister, Student Council / Government
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received

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