vargasm6579
vargasm6579,
MBC ‘16
B.A., Criminal Justice and Safety Studies
senior trying to survive college
Features Included
3
Essays
4
Schools
1
Scores
4
Advice
1
ECs
1
Sports

Background

Hometown new york city, New York
GenderFemale
EthnicityHispanic
AdmissionEarly Decision
English First Language Yes

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • University of Miami (Coral Gables, FL)
  • American University (Washington, DC)
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Mary Baldwin College (Staunton, VA)

Applied for a B.A. in Criminal Justice and Safety Studies

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: Sibling

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Personal Statement
430 Words
Love of writing
“Sophie!” screamed Riley as she approached the entrance to the Dalia Boutique on Bleeker St. Dalia’s is one of the newest hotspots in town and it is all thanks to Sophie and her genius marketing techniques. She is Manhattan’s premier marketing guru and thanks to her over 300 stores have gone from the brink of closing to trendy places to hang out and buy useless merchandise. “Rye! So tell me how do you like the new store?” asked Sophie. ...
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Supplemental Essay Issue of personal significance
7 Words
Managing Stress and Fatigue in Law Enforcement
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Additional Essay Details
1729 Words
Managing Stress and Fatigue When entering the workforce everyone has to deal with stress and fatigue but, police officers and active duty military servicemen deal with it more so while on the job daily. These two occupations face life and death with every move they make. There is major stress because when they go on duty they never know if they are making it home. Patrol officers are not the only one to deal with stress; administrators also deal with...
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General Admissions Advice

Recommended summer activities during high school and college
23 Words
Get involved in everything and anything possible....
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Most popular extracurricular activities at my college
17 Words
student government positions are the...
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My favorite course thus far, and why
26 Words
My favorite course so far has us foreign...
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What I like about my school’s location and culture
19 Words
My school is great because our...
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High School Performance

GPA
3
(no specification of weighting)
Rank
Top 10%
 
High School TypePublic
Academic Performance in High School Low at first but improved
Explanation of Low Grades

Test Scores

Highest SAT
1120
 
SAT Score Details
 
Converted SAT Score840

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Sports

SportsTennis

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesNational Honor Society

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences

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