College Admissions Info

Mary Baldwin College, ‘16
BA, Criminal Justice and Safety Studies

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • Test Scores
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 1 supplemental essays
  • 4 advice topics

Student Background

senior trying to survive college
From: new york city , New York
Gender: Female
Race/Ethnicity: Hispanic
Legacy: Sibling
Admission: Early Decision
Applied To: 4 schools
Accepted At: MBC
Denied At:
Waitlisted At:
Withdrew From:
Is English First Language: Yes

Test Scores

Converted SAT Score: 840
Highest SAT: 1120

High School Performance

(no specification of weighting)
Top 10%
High School Type: Public
Academic Performance in High School: Low at first but improved
Explanation of Any Low Grades:

Extracurriculars & Awards

Sports: Tennis
Extracurricular Activities: National Honor Society
How Spent Summers:
Volunteer Experiences:

College Application Essays

Personal Statement: Love of writing
430 Words
“Sophie!” screamed Riley as she approached the entrance to the Dalia Boutique on Bleeker St. Dalia’s is one of the newest hotspots in town and it is all thanks to Sophie and her genius marketing techniques. She is Manhattan’s premier marketing guru and thanks to her over 300 stores have gone from the brink of closing to trendy places to hang out and buy useless merchandise. “Rye! So tell me how do you like the new store?” asked Sophie. ...

Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance
7 Words
Managing Stress and Fatigue in Law Enforcement

Additional Essay Details:
1729 Words
Managing Stress and Fatigue When entering the workforce everyone has to deal with stress and fatigue but, police officers and active duty military servicemen deal with it more so while on the job daily. These two occupations face life and death with every move they make. There is major stress because when they go on duty they never know if they are making it home. Patrol officers are not the only one to deal with stress; administrators also deal with...

College Admissions Advice

Recommended summer activities during high school and college
23 Words
Get involved in everything and anything possible....

Most popular extracurricular activities at my college
17 Words
student government positions are the...

My favorite course thus far, and why
26 Words
My favorite course so far has us foreign...

What I like about my school’s location and culture
19 Words
My school is great because our...