
Features Included
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Essays
8
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Advice
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Sports

Background
Hometown
Roslyn Heights, New York
GenderFemale
EthnicityAsian, Black / African American, White Non-Hispanic
AdmissionRegular Decision, Early Action
Class of2017
English First Language
Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken
Spanish

Results, Essays, and Advice
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Pennsylvania State University - University Park (University Park, PA)
Applied for a B.S. in Marketing
Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: NoSchool Specific Essays
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The doorbell rang. Mom scurried to answer it. I strained to overhear the muffled words from an unfamiliar voice as I listened from my room. “Mindy, the results came back positive. You have melanoma.” Melanoma? Cancer. My mom has cancer? Did I hear it correctly? My heart began to pound faster and faster. My mind raced, refusing to accept what I had just heard. This must be a mistake! Surely my determined, full-of-life, beautiful mother couldn’t be sick. That...Read more...Supplemental Essay Explaining low grades/scores553 WordsCalvin Coolidge, the 30th president of the United States, was known as a man of few words. Notwithstanding, one quote attributed to him speaks to me: Nothing in this world can take the place of persistence. Talent will not; nothing is more common than unsuccessful people with talent. Genius will not; unrewarded genius is almost a proverb. Education will not; the world is full of educated failures. Persistence and determination alone are omnipotent. This particular aphorism not only personally resonates,...Read more...Additional Essay Details544 WordsCalvin Coolidge, the 30th president of the United States, was known as a man of few words. Notwithstanding, one quote attributed to him speaks to me: Nothing in this world can take the place of persistence. Talent will not; nothing is more common than unsuccessful people with talent. Genius will not; unrewarded genius is almost a proverb. Education will not; the world is full of educated failures. Persistence and determination alone are omnipotent. This particular aphorism not only personally resonates,...Read more...General Admissions Advice
Additional material sent in after waitlisted or deferred303 WordsWisconsin is a large school with a ton of spirit and great academic opportunities. With over 160 undergraduate majors to choose from I would be sure to find a major, as I am going in as undeclared freshman year. I look forward to taking a wide range of courses and am confident that the academic programs at Wisconsin will allow and help me to find my niche. Throughout high school, I have participated in a multitude of community services; from working at Winthrop Hospital, to mentoring kids with learning disabilities, and to cooking with kids every Saturday, I have embraced each...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received26 WordsHelped really organize myself. With applying to many...Read more...High School Performance
GPA3.60(no specification of weighting)RankTop 25%
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades
Test Scores
Highest SAT1190on 1600 scaleHighest SAT1650SAT Score Details
Other SAT ScoresSAT Prep
AP / IB Classes and Scores
Details3 classes and scoresSports
SportsTrack & Field , Softball , Tennis
Extracurriculars
ActivitiesCharity Drive Organizing, Conservancy Volunteer, Emergency Medical Service / Fire Dept Volunteer, Students Against Drunk Driving (Destructive Decisions) (SADD)
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