College Admissions Info

University of Pennsylvania, ‘15
BBA, Business Management

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • Test Scores
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 3 supplemental essays
  • 5 advice topics

Student Background

Management & Technology, Entrepreneur, Automation, AI & Machine Learning (Tensor Flow, IBM Watson API)
From: Broomfield , Colorado
Gender: Male
First Gen College Student: No
Race/Ethnicity: Asian
Legacy: No
Admission: Early Decision
Applied To: 3 schools
Accepted At: Colorado
Denied At:
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Is English First Language: Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken: Gan Chinese, Spanish

Test Scores

Converted SAT Score: 1520
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High School Performance

GPA, Weighted
Top 1%
High School Type: Public
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Academic Performance in High School: Steady
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Extracurriculars & Awards

Sports: Soccer, Track & Field, Martial Arts
Extracurricular Activities: National Honor Society, Student Council / Government, Key Club, Science Club/Team, Tutoring/Mentoring, School Jazz / Orchestra, Local Orchestra / Symphony / Band, Model Congress / Model UN
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College Application Essays

Personal Statement : Athletic achievement, Reaching a goal
582 Words
Contemplating Every Breath I maintained the clarity of my conscience, despite the brewing tempest of adrenaline surging in my veins. Under this gathering storm, I remained composed, even as the explosion from the gunshot reverberated into my ears. It was the summer of my sophomore year and I was contending in the best and final competition of the 110m hurdles at Colorado’s Denver Metro Track Meet. I had envisioned the sensation of breaking the finish line a thousand times...

Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay
598 Words
Objectives and Opportunities Every summer, my local library holds a discounted book sale, practically giving donated textbooks away for free. At this hectic event, students and parents competitively scourer the mounds of books, looking for chances to breach into new realms of knowledge. Out of the chaos, I managed to gain a hold of my first philosophy textbook. I grasped this opportunity to open my mind to a higher dimension. The story of success is elucidated through this book sale....

Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school
487 Words
Autobiography I had dreamt of this moment for my entire life. I was giving a standard twenty minute lecture at the annual Technology, Entertainment, Design conference, commonly known as TED. Although I stood on the stage at the seminar for the first time, I felt like a regular; from the countless of hours I have spent watching such presentations, I have become familiar with the aesthetic setting as if it was my own home. I would gratefully welcome every Monday...

Supplemental Essay: Other
80 Words
In your essays, it is important to tell what you want in life, what you are interested in, what you will contribute to the school both as a student and an alumni, and who you are as a person. Show that you have overcome adversity and are resilient. Also, take something that you have accomplished in high school and tell the admission officer what that reveals about you as a person and why you deserve to be at the school.

College Admissions Advice

Post-college plans
52 Words
Find a mentor of someone who you desire to be three to five years out. This...

Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received
38 Words
No. Everything is available online these days. You don't need the...

Recommended summer activities during high school and college
85 Words
Just be active and a self-starter. There are 168 hours in a week and 12 weeks every summer. Do something you're passionate about so you can use all...

My favorite course thus far, and why (UPenn)
75 Words
Take a Wharton negotiations course. The concepts are applicable to all interpersonal relationships. It'll be useful for your entire life. You are...

5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!) (UPenn)
235 Words
1. Career-Oriented. Wharton is extremely career focused and the education is centered on knowledge that can be directly applied after graduation. The majority of people go work in industry immediately after graduation. It's a great school to go to if you're interested in consulting, investment banking, product management, or starting your own company. The school puts a lot of effort in helping students with internships and good career paths...