College Admissions Info

California State University - East Bay, ‘19

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • Test Scores
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 1 supplemental essays
  • 5 advice topics

Student Background

From: Granada Hills , California
Gender: Female
First Gen College Student: Yes
Race/Ethnicity: Asian, White Non-Hispanic
Applied To: 10 schools
Accepted At: CSUN, CSU East Bay, UCSC, U Oregon, WWU, SFSU
Denied At:
Waitlisted At:
Withdrew From:
Is English First Language: Yes

Test Scores

Highest ACT:
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High School Performance

(no specification of weighting)
High School Type: Public
College Classes In High School:
Academic Performance in High School: Steady

Extracurriculars & Awards

Extracurricular Activities: Prom Committee, Yearbook
Elaborate on Extracurriculars or Work:
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Awards Received:

College Application Essays

Personal Statement: Death of a loved one
557 Words
Cancer has been a part of my life since I was 10 years old. When I was in 5th grade my father was diagnosed with melanoma, a deadly form of skin cancer. As a young girl, I hardly understood what that meant, simply that my dad was sick, but he would be better because he was a strong person. He quickly went into remission and there seemed to be nothing more to worry about. The only time I ever questioned the...

Supplemental Essay: Unique question posed by school
373 Words
"Let's walk to the end of cancer." This is the slogan of the Light the Night walk. The Light the Night Walk is a fundraising campaign by the Leukemia and Lymphoma society to end cancer. The point of this walk was to earn money for Leukemia and Lymphoma research. This walk honors both survivors and those who have lost their fight to blood cancers. I have participated in this walk for the last 3 years. I always joined with the same...

College Admissions Advice

Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received
34 Words
I had a semi private college counselor, and I definitely...

Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice
70 Words
I have not taken out loans yet, but I probably will have to in the future. Apply for scholarships. Even if...

My advice about getting recommenders
82 Words
Don't procrastinate and wait till the last minute, because then the teacher will have to rush on your letter and you never know what kind...

Most popular extracurricular activities at my college
30 Words
The most popular extracurricular at my school was robotics,...

What I’d change about my application process
51 Words
I would have definitely changed the schools I applied to. I mostly applied out of...