College Admissions Info

California State University - Monterey Bay, ‘18
BBA, Accounting

Profile Overview

Profile contains
  • Test Scores
  • High School Performance
  • Extracurriculars & Awards
  • Personal statement
  • 1 supplemental essays
  • 5 advice topics

Student Background

My name is Jasmin, I like to go to the movies and play with my cats.
From: La Habra , California
Gender: Female
Race/Ethnicity: Hispanic
Legacy: Parent
Admission: Regular Decision
Applied To: 6 schools
Accepted At: Cal Poly Pomona, CSUMB
Denied At:
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Withdrew From:
Is English First Language: Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken: Spanish

Test Scores

Converted SAT Score: 1070
Highest SAT: 1470
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High School Performance

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High School Type: Public
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Academic Performance in High School: Steady
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Extracurriculars & Awards

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College Application Essays

Personal Statement: Leaving home
108 Words
Leaving home was probably the hardest thing I have ever done. At first I was so excited to leave the nest and experience the world without parents. Once I got to my apartment I realized what a mistake I made. I missed everything about my home. I missed my friends, family, pets, and boyfriend. Now I can't wait to return! Living on my own has been difficult and scary sometimes, but I am glad I tried it. There was...

Supplemental Essay: Explaining low grades/scores
312 Words
My high school GPA was on the lower side due to my lack of effort. However in college I am doing much better. I have not reached my full potential but this semester I will finish with a 3.5 GPA. I am proud of my GPA now since it is a better indication of the kind of student I am. It better reflects my abilities to do well in school and to be a good student. I wish I could have...

Additional Essay Details:
35 Words
College has been a great experience for me. Teachers in high school doubted my ability to do well in college since I have a hard time putting in effort, but I am doing very well!

College Admissions Advice

My favorite course thus far, and why
116 Words
My favorite course by far has to be my Macroeconomics class. This class was very interesting and taught me so much. What made this course great was my amazing professor! She was wonderful and so...

5 adjectives that describe a typical student at my school (Feel free to elaborate!)
119 Words
Most students I have come into contact with at my school are open minded, driven, different, intelligent, and friendly. My campus is so diverse and strives to continue to have a diverse campus. Students here have...

What I now know about my school that I never would have known prior to enrolling
118 Words
I didn't know how caring my school is. Whenever there is an incident at my school they notify us IMMEDIATELY! Such as when a sexual assault occurs or a death. I'm very glad they do...

Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received
135 Words
I did not use a counselor at all because my dad is a college graduate. He was my adviser he told me to apply to 3 safe schools and 3 harder schools. He said it was to be smart but also to take...

Post-college plans
155 Words
I will be working to get my CPA and CMA while working at an accounting firm. I will continue to work at this firm for few years to gain experience, but then I will own a firm. I want to be a successful business woman when I...