Valdeztimothy1
Valdeztimothy1,
Claremont (CMC) ‘19
B.A., Biological Engineering, , Political Science and Government
I am a first generation Latino student who is trying to make it in a world that my people traditionally don't make it in.
Features Included
3
Essays
11
Schools
10
Scores
1
Advice
7
ECs
0
Sports

Background

Hometown Baldwin Park, California
GenderMale
AdmissionRegular Decision
English First Language Yes
Other Language(s) Spoken Spanish

Results, Essays, and Advice

Accepted
Waitlisted or Withdrew
Denied
  • Claremont McKenna College (Claremont, CA)
  • University of California - Los Angeles (Los Angeles, CA)
  • University of California - Berkeley (Berkeley, CA)
  • University of California - Irvine (Irvine, CA)
  • University of California - Riverside (Riverside, CA)
  • Pomona College (Claremont, CA)
  • Harvard University (Cambridge, MA)
  • Yale University (New Haven, CT)
  • Williams College (Williamstown, MA)
  • University of Southern California (Los Angeles, CA)
  • Amherst College (Amherst, MA)
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Claremont McKenna College (Claremont, CA)

Applied for a B.A. in Biological Engineering

Accepted and Enrolled Legacy: No

School Specific Essays

School Specific Advice

More Essays

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Who was she? Why would she do this? Was there something wrong with me? I was eight years old when my parents split up. Their paths diverted as a new one began for me, one where I shut everyone out. My emotions and physical health became unimportant and insomnia brought heavy purple eyelids that were weighed down with exhaustion. I felt non-existent. When my mom left, I felt disposable because she never came back or attempted to contact me. She...
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Supplemental Essay “Why us” school essay
199 Words
In my search for a new place to call my home for the next four of years, I am searching for places that will help me grow and develop. Claremont McKenna College is a place that can do this for me because it offers an abundance of activities such as the CMC Model United Nations Club and the Young Americans for Freedom club. These clubs are important to me because I want to be a political activist for people of...
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Additional Essay Details
46 Words
In this essay, I basically described why I applied to CMC and why I wanted to go there. Also, I described how I would benefit and I tied that into being a student of color and wanting to go back to my community and help them.
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General Admissions Advice

What set me apart from other applicants
66 Words
I believe that being a Latino first generation college student who has a good story is what set me apart...
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High School Performance

Weighted GPA
4.25
 
Rank
Top 5%
 
High School TypePublic
College Classes In High School
Academic Performance in High School Steady
Explanation of Low Grades

Test Scores

Highest ACT
27
 
ACT Score Details
 
Other ACT Scores
ACT Prep
Highest SAT
1610
 
SAT Score Details
 
Converted SAT Score1160
Other SAT Scores
SAT Prep
SAT IIs

AP / IB Classes and Scores

Details11 classes and scores

Sports

Extracurriculars

ActivitiesMarching Band, National Honor Society

Experience & Awards

How Spent Summers
Volunteer Experiences
Awards Received

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