ryanhl5138,
UPenn
B.A., Biology
I am a junior in the Life Sciences & Management Program hosted jointly by the University of Pennsylvania's College of Arts & Sciences and The Wharton School.
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Fremont, California
GenderMale
EthnicityAsian, Native Hawaiian / Pacific Islander
Class of2023
First Gen College StudentNo
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University of Pennsylvania (Philadelphia, PA)
Applied for a B.A. in Biology
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Personal Statement662 WordsChallenged a belief, Controversial topic, Development of personal values, Diversity statement, Feeling out of placeHis glittered hand reaches for mine, and I swiftly yank my arm back to avoid contact. Hurt momentarily clouds his eyes, but his excitement soon returns once he rejoins the chaos of the parade. As the surrounding clamor of drag queens and rainbow motorcycles drifts into my periphery, a desperate isolation overcomes me. This march is my community’s grandest welcome party—the epitome of acceptance—yet why do I feel like an excluded spectator? Shouldn’t my rainbow flag...Read more...Personal Statement346 WordsDevelopment of personal values, Extracurricular passion, Interest in med/sci/math, Leadership experienceI am a staunch opponent of the belief "Stick to your passions early." At best, this advice is idealistic, and at worst, it limits exploration. When I first volunteered as a science instructor at a local elementary school, this dogma was rampant, rigidifying curriculum and intimidating students. As cofounder and Director of Outreach of the non-profit organization Stemnova, I sought to eliminate the walls that suffocated STEM education. By our second year, I grew ambitious. I was determined to take...Read more...Personal Statement358 WordsAcademic achievement, Extracurricular passion, Interest in med/sci/math, Summer experience, Work experienceLike an unscratchable itch, the Finite Heartbeat Theory tugs constantly at my curiosities. Its hypothesis is simple - we have a predetermined number of heartbeats. When my half-pseudoscientist, half-biology teacher first exclaimed this to our class years ago, my seventh-grade self believed it wholeheartedly. By ninth grade, I feared the heart. With Grandpa passing away from a heart attack and my teacher's words still echoing in my head, I viewed the heart as a ticking time bomb. From my apprehension,...Read more...What have you done to make your school or your community a better place?Since childhood, I have always been fascinated with the Wubble Bubble. It was simple yet entertaining - its tinted surface humorously distorting my friend's whispers as they floated through the ball to my ear. While my Wubble Bubble now remains deflated in my garage, my fascination with bubbles is still very much afloat. Fortunately - or unfortunately as I have come to recognize - I don't have to look far to find one. In fact, I live in one. In...Read more...Personal Statement357 WordsDevelopment of personal values, Embarrassing mistake, Extracurricular passion, Failure experience, Interest in other academic subject, Issue of personal significanceThe first time I ever heard a recording of my debate speech, it was torture. It was less what I said, but more how I said it. My voice, both nasal and high-pitched, was excruciating to the ear, and immediately, what I once overlooked bolted to the forefront of my insecurities. In high school, with everyone changing, my distinct voice brought along with it belittling stereotypes: each "What's up with you high voice?" and "Your voice is gay" cornered me...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay663 WordsTo kill or not to kill is a question that has taunted me since June. Where my inner biologist yearned to dissect all the mice in the world (for science, of course), my inner ethicist questioned my sacrifices’ purposes. After all, these were living creatures in my hands: what set them so apart from me that justified their role as test subjects? From perusing Peter Singer’s Animal Liberation to attending cardiology conferences, answering the same concern from various lenses...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay110 WordsSustainability. A gardener myself, I’m already enamored by Dartmouth’s camaraderie with nature. Whether it be bee-keeping with classmates or relaxing in the organic farm alone, each facet of campus is a chance to humble myself, to reaffirm my appreciation for Earth. This self-effacing curiosity pervades Dartmouth’s D-Plan. If I’m going to be studying tropical-biology, I’m joining a foreign-study program to gather real samples in Caribbean reefs. If I want to grasp science’s role in...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Issue of personal significance323 WordsJane was commended for being a survivor. Clad in invisible armor, defiant against injustice—that’s how we imagined her as her story of sexual assault circulated. We deemed her a hero, nearing superhuman, but—as Jane would confide in me later—not once did our hasty label reflect her struggles honestly. To her, survivor implied that the worst was over, sidelining her depression for a more palatable story of overcoming. Our words weren’t ill-intentioned, but certainly, they were...Read more...Supplemental Essay: “Why us” school essay160 WordsMy love for collective adventures leads me to Duke. I’ve traversed Yosemite, scuba-dived with family, but none of these experiences even compare to the excitement of tenting with friends, braving the cold for a taste of athletic thrill. Between games, I’m eager to explore Duke’s various social niches. The International Cooking Club shines in particular: I’m giddy to embrace my surrounding diversity and share my own Taiwanese recipes. This love for community extends into academics. As...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Diversity statement270 WordsJane was commended for being a survivor. Clad in invisible armor and defiant against injustice—that’s how we imagined her as her story of sexual assault circulated. We deemed her a hero, nearing superhuman, but—as Jane would confide in me later—not once did our hasty label reflect her struggles honestly. To her, survivor implied that the worst was over. It sidelined her depression for a more palatable story of overcoming. Our words weren’t ill-intentioned, but certainly,...Read more...Supplemental Essay: Intellectual interest695 WordsAdvancing clinical virology and achieving queer equality are equal passions of mine. I once defined these ambitions as disparate aspects of myself, but through volunteering with Bay Area Women Against Rape, I found purpose in their synergy. My department specifically studied LGBTQ+ violence, and that’s how I met Eric. Initially, I only knew that he was “very sick,” but through interviews and emails, I pieced together his HIV diagnosis. His illness told two stories: one biological, one societal. As...Read more...School Specific Advice
How to increase chances at my school55 WordsSpeaking to my admissions officer at admit day, I learned that interdisciplinary learning is a huge, huge...Read more...Why I ultimately chose my school72 WordsI ultimately chose Penn for its academic flexibility. The One University policy allows me to explore disciplines from all the colleges, and...Read more...How to increase chances at my school98 WordsI'm not attending Duke, but I've certainly learned a lot about this school from my almost week-long visit. For my LGBTQ+ peers, Duke is one of the most welcoming,...Read more...More Essays
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How to deal with the stress of applying to college68 WordsFor me, constantly comparing myself to my peers during the first semester of senior year was rough. Looking back, I...Read more...Whether I took out loans or applied for scholarships, and my advice114 WordsI did not take out loans or apply for scholarships, but after admissions, I did negotiate with schools to increase my financial aid by 15k. Once admitted, always ask for more, and always appeal...Read more...Whether I used a private admissions counselor, and advice I received88 WordsEarly in the year, I had a counselor. While professional guidance seems "professional," they really know as much about the process as you do; I let...Read more...High School Performance
Weighted GPA4.33(equivalent to 4.00 unweighted)RankTop 10%
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